我需要三分鐘的演講稿 以下是我大略的講稿 請大家給我一點意見 例如需要改進的部份 還有需要補充的東西 謝謝大家^^
演講題目: A self-introduction for applying admission to a graduate program (specify your field)
I have just graduated from English department in NTNU. And I am eager to apply for the English Teaching Graduate Institute in our university.
I have been very interested in English teaching for a long time. I have studied very hard and always get good grades in English. And I have finished my college credits in education with high grades. Furthermore, I have great patience and passion devoting to education. And I have some experience in teaching as a tutor as well.
I hope I would have the chance to enter the English Teaching Graduate Institute in NTNU. Thank you!
- 柳下飛Lv 61 0 年前最佳解答
I have graduated from NTNU, major in English. Since I graduated in this University; therefore, I want to contribute myself to this University and I would like to apply for the English Teaching Graduate Institute in our University.
I am interested in English teaching indeed for long. I studied very hard and always get good result in English. Plus I have finished my college credits in education with high grading in English subject. At last but not the least, I have great patience and passion devoting to education, plus gained some experiences in teaching as a tutor for few years.
Thank you very much for giving me the opportunity to present myself, I hope I would have a chance to work with you and teaching in in NTNU. Thank you!
Problem: You ahve too much "And" & "I have"
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