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請幫我看看這篇作文需要改的地方有哪些!我很急.(10點^^

So many people think the international marriage is very romantic. It that true ? Of cause not certain .For instance , the couple encounter in the airport . At first they feel international love is too hard and indispose . For months and years they get marry and now they operate the coffee shop for two years . Second , a foreigner servant work in the rich man's house . They fell in love quickly and get marry .Now the foreigner servant is the palatial house's hostess and they also had good ending.But there isn't any international marriages had happy ending . Some example is not .Like the couple who love each other profound . But the girls family think that her husband is a foreigner . So many time they feel the stress is too large so they break up now .

In my view , the different nationality not really a good choice . Every country has it culture and the way they get along . So we could not blend into their life style . But I believe 如果我們用真誠的心.去找到ㄧ個好對象.那不一定要異國婚姻.也一定會有很好的未來. (請也幫我翻最後中文字^^)

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  • Ben
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    1 0 年前
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    Many people think international marriage is very romantic. It that true ? The answer might not be so certain .For instance , one lovely couple encountered in the airport . At first they felt international love is exotic and exciting, later on they figured out that this distant relationship is too hard to keep. After months and years of struggling, they finally got married and now they operate a coffee shop for two years . There was another story. A foreign worker worked in a richman's house . They fell in love quickly and got married soon .Now the foreign bride is the hostess and they have a happy ending.But not all the international marriages had happy endings . Sometimes the case would be that a woman loves her forign boyfriend but the girl's family won't recognize or accept him as her husband because he is a foreigner . So many times they couldn't bear the enormous stress so they broke up in the end .

    In my view , the different nationality is not really a good choice . Every country has its own culture and the way they get along with . So we could not immerse into their lifestyle easily . But I believe if we have an open and honest mind, we can find our better half and have a rosy future, no matter what nationality he or she has.

    參考資料: myself
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  • 1 0 年前

    It that true? => 應該是 Is that true?

    其他的就參考前兩位前輩吧

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  • 1 0 年前

    But I believe 如果我們用真誠的心

    But I believe if we keep an heart , a true heart ,

    去找到ㄧ個好對象.那不一定要異國婚姻.也一定會有很好的未來

    everyone can find a good mate and a great future , and it doesn't have to be an international marrage

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    For months and years they get "marry"

    ==> got married

    They fell in love quickly and get marry

    ==> got married

    So many time they feel the stress is too large so they break up now

    ==> There's too much stress between them so they broke up

    the different nationality not really a good choice

    ==> The different nationality isn't a really good choice

    參考資料: Me ^V^
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