今年23歲,在高中讀的是tourism,在專科唸的是旅館系,而現在主修department of leisure,自從選擇tourism這條路以來,我深深愛上這個產業,並也一值期許自己能在觀光這條路上有所成就,俗話說"讀萬捲書不如行萬捲路",可惜的是,即使我知道這個道理,卻從未離開台灣看看不同的世界,希望各位教授能給我這個機會,走入世界的天空.
這樣連在一起 有點看不太董 ㄆ!!!
- 1 0 年前最佳解答
I am twenty-three years old. My major in high school was Tourism and studied in Roadhouse Department(暫時翻譯, 請以你們系所的英文名為準) in junior college. The Department of Leisure is my major at present. After selecting tourism as my major, I found myself fall in love deeply with it and have always expected self accomplishment. There is an old saying: “He that travels far knows much.” Unfortunately, even though I understand the meaning, yet never leave Taiwan to visit different countries. I sincerely hope to earn this opportunity to learn more valuable experiences from the world.
中文的部分, 如果有需要面試時說, 建議幾個地方修改：
3. 最後一段話：希望各位教授能給我這個機會,走入世界的天空. 建議改成 我真誠的希望各位能提供我這個機會向世界學習更多寶貴的經驗
由於不太瞭解您參加的面試內容與細節, 僅建議您可以再思考一下以下問題, 以增加說服力：
- 1 0 年前
23 years old this year, that read is tourism in the high school, that read is that the hotel is in the training, but major in department of leisure now, since choosing this road to tourism, I love this industry deeply deeply , and a value expects oneself to move ahead in visiting this road, as the saying goes that " reads ten thousand books and is not so good as walking on ten thousand ways ", it's a pity , even if I know this reason, but has never left Taiwan and seen different worlds , has hoped that every professor can give me this chance , enter into the sky of the world.
- 1 0 年前
I'm 23 this year and took Tourism in my high school. I had studied Hotel Management before and I am now majoring in the "department of leisure". I fell in love with this industry ever since the day i took up "tourism", and really hope to achieve far in this industry.
Despite knowing the knowledge gained from traveling is much significant than from theories, I have never had the chance to go out of Taiwan for greater exposure. Hereby I hoped that I am able to get the opportunity from the board for a different experience out of Taiwan.參考資料： myself!
- 柳下飛Lv 61 0 年前
Hi, My name is xxx, I'm 23 years old, I am studying tourism in high school, major in Tourism (*again?) in the Department of Leisure.
Since I picked up this major, I love this subject so much and always wish to contribute myself into this aspect. I wish to gain more travel experiences through this occupation.
I understand we can learn more through travelling; therefore, I really wish if I could gain more travel experiences & visiting different cities & counties in this world. Wish you could give me this chance, thanks for giving me this opportunities to express myself. Thank you very much!
*Some of the wordings is too "over" - 太造作...