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小雨 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我改一段難到吐血的英文,20點,急!

如果您要今年的澳洲獨家代理權,我們可以給您批發價在打9折的價位,

We can give you a price at least 10% below the wholesale price if you would like to have exclusive rights for our producti in Australia for this year.

但每個月必須向我們購買2000個units,

But you have to import 2000 units each month.

由於我們在澳洲還沒有客戶,即使您無法獨家代理,我們仍會將瑞典的消費者或其他批發商介紹給您

If you wouldn't like to have exclusive rights ,we will still introduce our

customers to you because there are no distributors in Sweden.

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非常感謝!

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哈~回復Jose,寫太快寫錯~~

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    光您好,回答內容讓您滿意,是我最大的榮幸。

    本篇文章因屬商業書信,故必需特別注意商業用語的精準度。以下針對您的問句開始回答:

    1.如果您要今年的澳洲獨家代理權,我們可以給您批發價再打9折的價位,

    答:We can offer you the price 10% off than the wholesale one if you would be our exclusive agent in Australia this year.

    (注意,本句的重點是「獨家代理」)

    2.但每個月必須向我們購買2000個units,

    答:But you have to order 2000 units each month.

    (這是字面上的翻譯,若照前後文意來說翻成But the minimum order will be 2000 units per month.較好)

    3.由於我們在澳洲還沒有客戶,即使您無法獨家代理,我們仍會將瑞典的消費者或其他批發商介紹給您

    答:Due to the reason that we still don't have any customers in Australia, if you don't have the will to be our exclusive agent, we will still introduce swedish consumers or other wholesalers to you.

    以上回答結束,希望這樣的回答能讓您滿意。

    2008-03-14 18:07:36 補充:

    記得,批發價不是"retail",而是"wholesale"哦!"retail"是指零售價,可是差了十萬八千里的!

    參考資料: 文意及文法
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  • 1 0 年前

    如果您要今年的澳洲獨家代理權,我們可以給您批發價在打9折的價位,

    If you want to this year's Australian exclusive right, we can give you a 10% in the wholesale price of the price,

    但每個月必須向我們購買2000個units,

    But we have to buy every month 2,000 units,

    Since we have not, in Australia, even if you can not exclusive agents, we will be in Sweden on consumers or other wholesalers to you

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  • Jose
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    1 0 年前

    請問瑞典和澳洲有何關係?距離十萬八千里耶!

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  • 1 0 年前

    如果您要今年的澳洲獨家代理權,我們可以給您批發價在打9折的價位,

    If you are looking for the exclusive right in Australia this year, we can give you the price of 10% off from the retail price.

    但每個月必須向我們購買2000個units,

    But as condition, you have to purchase at least 2,000 units each month.

    由於我們在澳洲還沒有客戶,即使您無法獨家代理,我們仍會將瑞典的消費者或其他批發商介紹給您

    Due to we have no clients here in Australia at this time, even you are unable to obtain the exclusive right, we will still going to introduce to you other customers and other retailers locally.

    參考資料: ~Self~
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  • 1 0 年前

    如果您要今年的澳洲獨家代理權,我們可以給您批發價在打9折的價位,

    If you want this year the Australian one's own power of attorney, we

    may give you the wholesale price to hit the price position which 9

    folds,

    但每個月必須向我們購買2000個units,

    But each month must purchase 2,000 units to us,

    由於我們在澳洲還沒有客戶,即使您無法獨家代理,我們仍會將瑞典的消費者或其他批發商介紹給您

    Because we do not have the customer in Australia, even if you are

    unable the sole agent, we still could Sweden's consumer or other

    wholesalers introduced gave you

    參考資料: 我 + 字典
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