? 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請英文高手幫我修改一下~

可否幫我看看怎麼加入becasue of因為我要寫因果的作文,或是用so that 也可以,拜託了!

I like to try new things and take risks because I thought it is a challenge which can give me strength. I like learning Japanese, which is my favorite subject. maybe its difficult, but I want to give it a try.

When I studied at senior high school, I learned Japanese and found it was really interesting. Now I have studied Japanese for 5 years, which is a long time. And I have never given it up. I just thought learning Japanese can make me happy. So I hope graduated can went to Japan can Self-service travel. I know it's not easy, but I just thought to learned from good Japanese, I can went to there. I also have Japanese license. I thought it's not enough, I wish I can more study hard. For me, learned Japanese is important.

I very study hard learned Japanese because I really want to Japan. I don't know how to express my feeling, but it really enlightens my life. So, I'm very proud of myself.

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那題目訂go to Japan會很怪嗎?英文高手可否建議好的題目因為題目是自訂的~

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  • ?
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    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    你動詞時態有些用錯 我幫你改過來了

    為了用because of 和so that 我改了一點內容

    改的部份有加中文

    用到的部份有框起來

    其他改的部份都是改用字內容不變

    給你做個參考

    我自己也不是native speaker無法說是perfect

    但是是要報告之類的話這樣我覺得應該可以!

    I like to try new things and take risks because I thought it is a challenge which can give me strength. I like learning Japanese, which is my favorite subject. maybe its difficult, but I want to give it a try.

    *I like to try new things and take risks because it will be quite challenging for me and it might make me stronger. For example, my favorite subject, Japanese, though it is said to be difficult, I still want to give it try.

    When I studied at senior high school, I learned Japanese and found it was really interesting. Now I have studied Japanese for 5 years, which is a long time. And I have never given it up. I just thought learning Japanese can make me happy. So I hope graduated can went to Japan can Self-service travel. I know it's not easy, but I just thought to learned from good Japanese, I can went to there. I also have Japanese license. I thought it's not enough, I wish I can more study hard. For me, learned Japanese is important.

    *I learned Japanese when I was in high school and found it quite interesting. I have studied it for five years, and 【because of】the sense of achievement I can get from learning it(因為從其中得到的成就感), I never give it up. I am thinking about taking a trip to Japan myself after graduation. I will be surrounded by lots of Japanese speakers there 【so that】I can practice my Japanese and learn more from them. (我在日本會被很多當地人圍繞。如此一來,我便可以練習我的日文而且從他們身上學更多。)I also have a certificate of Japanese but since it is not enough, I will study harder because learning Japanese is important for me.

    2008-03-14 10:06:19 補充:

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    2008-03-14 10:11:09 補充:

    補充這邊怪怪的 我用意見貼上

    2008-03-14 10:15:42 補充:

    I very study hard learned Japanese because I really want to Japan. I don't know how to express my feeling, but it really enlightens my life. So, I'm very proud of myself.

    2008-03-14 10:15:53 補充:

    *I study Japanese hard because I really want to go to Japan. I can not express my willingness very well to that but Japanese make my life more colorful undoubtedly.

    2008-03-14 10:16:47 補充:

    又好了 真不好意思

    大概就是這樣囉

    希望有幫到你

    最後一句So, I'm very proud of myself. 我覺得可要可不要

    要的話不用so

    參考資料: 自己
  • 1 0 年前

    I like to try new things and take risks because I thought it is a challenge which can give me strength.

    I like to learn Japanese, which is my favorite subject. maybe because of its difficulty, but I want to give it a try.

    When I studied at senior high school, I started to learn Japanese and found it was really interesting. Now I have studied Japanese for 5 years, which is a long time. It is so interesting that I never give it up. I think(一直都這樣覺得用現在式) learning Japanese can make me happy. After gradution, I wish I can go to Japan and do Self-service travel. I know it's not easy. However. I think if I can speak Japanese well, I could have a better life there.

    Although I have Japanese license, I thought it's not enough. I wish I can study harder

    For me, learning Japanese is important.

    I want to go to Japan so much that I study so hard. It's hard to express my strong feeling. but it really enlightens my life. Because of learning Japanese. my life become different and I am so proud of myself.

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    參考資料: 自己
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