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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我修改一下這篇作文^^!我的文法不好耶

A Mistake

Everyone would make a mistake or two sometimes. While mistakes

indicate our imprudence, it can also stimulate progress. Learning from

mistakes is the best strategy to prevent the same one from repeating. A

mistake may also a shelter in which we trigger our reflection before we

make even bigger ones. So, it will not be necessary to feel guilty of

a mistake. On the contrary, it should be considered from a more positive

perspective. If well pondered, a mistake can even turn failure

into success in the long run. So, there is always a way out for every

mistake made. It does not matter how other people think about our

mistakes. But, it can make a lot of differences if we never stop to

consider how to learn from mistakes.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    A Mistake

    Everyone maybe make one mistake again same time. It's able indicating

    that we are imprudent, that sure inspire to someone.

    Learning by mistakes is the best strategy to prevent someone same as me and repeat again.

    A mistake is look as a mirror when we make same as wrong as before.

    However, it doesn't feel guilty about taking mistakes.

    In unlike, you should think more correct things about internal of personality.

    If you thought it deeply, you can be a nice man and restart a new face

    when change to yourself.

    In the end, you need to trust yourself and bevelie.

    Nobody wishs to make mistake, and that can get a lot of chooses for

    these making worngs men.

    Athough, we will never stop to make more wrongs by anythings

    , but we can learn more when make mistakes.

    我覺得你講的太囉唆了, 需要改進, 英文簡單就好, 太囉唆想太多也很浪費時間, 盡量簡單易懂就好, 而且很多重複的句子, 要改成不一樣的, 一直重複看了就覺得很煩阿~

    參考資料: ME
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  • 1 0 年前

    Everyone can make a mistake or two sometimes. While mistakes make us look silly, it can also make us wiser. Learning from mistakes is the best strategy to prevent us from repeating our mistakes. A mistake may also allow us to reflect upon our problems so we can learn from them. Hopefully by learning we won't make even bigger mistakes in the future.

    So, don't feel guilty about making a mistake. A mistake should be considered from a more positive

    perspective, if you think about it a mistake can even turn failure into a success.

    2008-03-28 13:13:40 補充:

    Mistakes aren't fatal and we can always learn from them. It does not matter what other people think about our mistakes. However, it can make a difference if we never stop to consider how to learn from our mistakes.

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