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A Time I Was Late

I was fired yesterday because it was the third time I was late for work,

and it really let my boss down and pissed him off. Why was I late for

work? Actually, I do not want to bring it up again. Anyways, I had a

really bad luck yesterday. When I just got up, I didn’t notice that the

power was cut off, and I thought the garage was broken down or ran out

of machine oil because I could not open it. Then, because of the

curiosity,

I was trying to find out what happened to my garage door. Two hours

has

passed since I was trying to fix the garage door, and I just did not want

to

give up. After the power restored, I finally realized that I have gotten a

bigger problem—I was late.

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    I was fired yesterday because it was the third time I was late for work,

    and it really let my boss down and pissed him off. Why was I late for

    work? Actually, I did not want to bring it up again. Anyways, I was really unlucky yesterday. When I just got up, I didn’t notice that the

    power was cut off, and I thought the garage was broken down or ran out

    of oil because I could not open it. Then, because of the

    curiosity,

    I was trying to find out what happened to my garage door. Two hours

    (had)

    passed since I was trying to fix the garage door, and I just did not want

    to

    give up. After the power restored, I finally realized that I have gotten a

    bigger problem—I was late.

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