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1.But in order to complete a production on time, sometimes there is a second unit using different crew or actors, and an assistant director will take care of shooting the selected scene.

2.The following step, bring a saucepan, gently place the roasting pan in the oven.

3.They will keep moulting when their inner bodies growing or when their crust broken.

4.Every millions of larvae; however, only few can survive.

5.After dividing hair and fix hair by pin, one can start to dye hair.

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6.One begins by skin test prevent hypersensitive: using cotton swab and spread some hair dye on arm or ear about one hour.

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7.With a splendid atmosphere and making your guests comfortable is very important.

8.Remember prepare chairs and desks in case of guests feel a little tired, they could relax. By doing so, they will think your are considerate.

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9.Waiting for a while, add in one tablespoon of chopped garlic and ginger, some chilies and chicken cubes.

10.After having done the previous steps, add one tablespoon of rice wine into the wok.

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  • Elisa
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1.But in order to complete a production on time, sometimes there is a second unit using different crew or actors, and an assistant director will take care of shooting the selected scene.

    **This sentence is okay. Though it is usually not good to start a sentence with the word “but”. It is best to remove the word “but”. The meaning of the sentence will stay the same.

    2. The following step, bring a saucepan, gently place the roasting pan in the oven.

    => The next step is to bring a saucepan and gently place the roasting pan in the oven.

    3.They will keep moulting when their inner bodies growing or when their crust broken.

    “moulting” is not the right word. I am guessing you meant “molt”

    => They will keep molting when their inner bodies grow or when their crust break.

    4.Every millions of larvae; however, only few can survive.

    => For every millions of larvae; however, only few can survive.

    5.After dividing hair and fix hair by pin, one can start to dye hair.

    => After dividing hair and fixing hair by pin, one can start to dye hair.

    6.One begins by skin test prevent hypersensitive: using cotton swab and spread some hair dye on arm or ear about one hour.

    => One begins by skin testing to prevent hypersensitivity, using cotton swab and spreading some hair dye on arm or ear for about one hour.

    7.With a splendid atmosphere and making your guests comfortable is very important.

    => It is very important to provide a splendid atmosphere and to make your guests feel comfortable.

    8.Remember prepare chairs and desks in case of guests feel a little tired, they could relax. By doing so, they will think your are considerate.

    => Remember to prepare chairs and desks in case that the guests feel a little tired and that they want to get some relaxation. By doing so, they will think that you are considerate of them.

    - To be Continued -

    2008-03-31 03:22:32 補充:

    9.Waiting for a while, add in one tablespoon of chopped garlic and ginger, some chilies and chicken cubes.

    => Waiting for a while, then add in one tablespoon of chopped garlic and ginger, some chilies and chicken cubes.

    - To be Continued -

    2008-03-31 03:22:50 補充:

    10.After having done the previous steps, add one tablespoon of rice wine into the wok.

    => After completing the above steps, add one tablespoon of rice wine into the wok.

    2008-03-31 03:27:09 補充:

    ** I believe that you are not asking to translate English into Chinese but to look at any grammar error or wrong usage of words in your sentences.

    參考資料: Myself. Studied English abroad at the age of 11. Tutored English as an Undergrad. A project manager in the US since 1992
  • 1 0 年前

    1.but為了完成一個生產上的時間,有時還有第二個單位採用不同的工作人員還是演員,和一名助理署長會照顧射擊選定的現場。

    二,以下的步驟,把一個平底鍋,輕輕放在烤爐潘在烘箱。

    3.they會不斷蛻殼時,他們的內心機構越來越多,或當他們的地殼破碎。

    4.every以百萬計的幼蟲,但只有很少人能存活。

    5.after除以頭髮和修理頭髮密碼,就可以開始染的頭髮。

    2008年3月30日22時58分58秒補充

    6.one開始皮膚試驗,防止過敏症:用棉拭子和蔓延,一些染髮劑對手臂或耳約一小時。

    2008年3月30日22時59分39秒補充

    7.with燦爛的氣氛,使您的客人舒適是非常重要的。

    8.remember準備坐椅及課桌案件客人感到有點累了,他們可以放鬆。這樣的話,他們會認為你是體貼。

    2008年3月30日23時00分28秒補充

    9.waiting了一會兒,放入一湯匙的切碎的大蒜和生薑,一些辣椒和雞肉塊。

    10.after做了以前的步驟,放入一湯匙米酒入鑊。

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