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中翻英~請幫我修改短文及文法

在台灣的我們雖然沒有能像一些寒帶國家有下雪,

Although we have no snow in Taiwan

但生在寶島台灣的我們也很幸運的是我們也有滑草這項運動,

But we are also very lucky is that we also have a Grass-skating, this exercise of Taiwan

滑雪礙於季節的關係,除了冬季,一般季節是無法享受滑雪的樂趣。

Skiing due to the relation of season, in addition to in winter, the general season is the fun that can't enjoy skiing.

而滑草,春、夏、秋一樣可以從事這項享受與刺激。

And Grass-skating, spring, in summer, autumn is similar and can work on this to enjoy and amazing.

「滑草」是由流行的冬季的運動-- 滑雪延伸出來的。

“Grass-skating " by sports of the popular winter- The one that ski and extend out.

為了能夠在不同季節中依然可以享受到滑雪的樂趣,

In order to can still enjoy the enjoyment of skiing during different seasons,

便研發出以滑雪原理為基礎而能在草地上滑行的器材。

Then develop the device that take skiing principle as foundation and can skid on the lawn.

而滑草鞋的滾珠,整個滑草器就像是個迷你的坦克車履帶;

And the Grass-skating shoes roll bead, the whole grass-ski machine is like a mini tank track;

在高速滑行時可以作出類似滑雪的動作。

Can be similar to movements that ski while sliding at a high speed.

我自己雖然沒有滑草的經驗,但我自己上網收集了一些關於大家滑草的經驗談;

Although myself there is no experience of grass-skating, I got to the Internet to collect some experience concerning everyone's grass-skating to talk by myself;

滑草是由高高的那一端 快速的往下衝,不分男女.不分年紀.都是歡樂的尖叫聲。

The grass-skating is by the very high fill down fast of one of throe’s end, no men and women will be assigned to, is an all happiness screech.

只要您有膽量、不怕摔,很快就能成為滑草好手了。

As long as you have courage and isn't afraid of to fall off, can soon become grass-skating good hand.

廣闊的青青草原,和陣陣泥土香,也可以享受美景

Wide blue and grassland, fragrant with a burst of earth, can enjoy the beautiful scenery too

想要登峰造極嗎?

Would you like to reach the peak of perfection?

最好也是唯一的方法就是--努力不懈,愈挫愈勇!

It you had better is that the only method is too --Diligent and untiring, frustrate the braver!

只要有恆心,相信你也會成為滑草高手。

So long as there is perseverance, believe you will become the past master of grass-skating.

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  • Elisa
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    1 0 年前
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    ** Did you use translating software to translate this? There grammars are all wrong. I think that the most important thing for you is to improve your grammar. Anyway, this is the correction (see correction after =>). Hope this helps!

    在台灣的我們雖然沒有能像一些寒帶國家有下雪, 但生在寶島台灣的我們也很幸運的是我們也有滑草這項運動,

    Although we have no snow in Taiwan . But we are also very lucky is that we also have a Grass-skating, this exercise of Taiwan

    => Although there is no snow in Taiwan , we are lucky to have grass skiing.

    Or you can rewrite it as:

    => Although there is no snow in Taiwan , we are lucky to enjoy the sport of grass skiing.

    滑雪礙於季節的關係,除了冬季,一般季節是無法享受滑雪的樂趣。

    Skiing due to the relation of season, in addition to in winter, the general season is the fun that can't enjoy skiing

    => Snow skiing being a seasonal sport, we are unable to enjoy it in any other season besides winter.

    而滑草,春、夏、秋一樣可以從事這項享受與刺激。

    And Grass-skating, spring, in summer, autumn is similar and can work on this to enjoy and amazing.

    => However, we can enjoy the excitement of grass skiing in spring, summer and autumn.

    「滑草」是由流行的冬季的運動-- 滑雪延伸出來的。

    “Grass-skating " by sports of the popular winter- The one that ski and extend out.

    => Grass skiing came from the popular winter sport – snow skiing.

    為了能夠在不同季節中依然可以享受到滑雪的樂趣,便研發出以滑雪原理為基礎而能在草地上滑行的器材。

    In order to can still enjoy the enjoyment of skiing during different seasons, Then develop the device that take skiing principle as foundation and can skid on the lawn.

    => In order to enjoy the fun of skiing in various season, the skiing equipment on the grass was invented based on the principle of snow skiing.

    而滑草鞋的滾珠,整個滑草器就像是個迷你的坦克車履帶;在高速滑行時可以作出類似滑雪的動作。

    And the Grass-skating shoes roll bead, the whole grass-ski machine is like a mini tank track; Can be similar to movements that ski while sliding at a high speed.

    => The rolling treads on the skis and the entire skiing equipment are like mini tank tracks. When in high speed, we feel like snow skiing.

    2008-04-10 11:23:53 補充:

    我自己雖然沒有滑草的經驗,但我自己上網收集了一些關於大家滑草的經驗談;

    => Although I do no have any grass skiing experience, I have collected a lot of information regarding grass skiing from the web.

    2008-04-10 11:24:14 補充:

    滑草是由高高的那一端快速的往下衝,不分男女.不分年紀.都是歡樂的尖叫聲。

    The grass-skating is by the very high fill down fast of one of throe’s end, no men and women will be assigned to, is an all happiness screech.

    => Grass skiing is a rapid downhill skiing. Regardless of sex and ages, all you hear is the exclamation of joy.

    2008-04-10 11:24:36 補充:

    只要您有膽量、不怕摔,很快就能成為滑草好手了。

    As long as you have courage and isn't afraid of to fall off, can soon become grass-skating good hand.

    => As long as you have courage and aren’t afraid of falling, you can become a top grass skier.

    2008-04-10 11:24:55 補充:

    廣闊的青青草原,和陣陣泥土香,也可以享受美景

    Wide blue and grassland, fragrant with a burst of earth, can enjoy the beautiful scenery too

    => You can enjoy the beautiful scenery of the spacious green plateau and the fresh smell of the soy.

    2008-04-10 11:25:29 補充:

    想要登峰造極嗎?最好也是唯一的方法就是--努力不懈,愈挫愈勇!

    Would you like to reach the peak of perfection? It you had better is that the only method is too --Diligent and untiring, frustrate the braver!

    => Would you like to reach your peak? The best and only way is nonstop practice and endeavor after each failure.

    2008-04-10 11:26:03 補充:

    只要有恆心,相信你也會成為滑草高手。

    So long as there is perseverance, believe you will become the past master of grass-skating.

    => So long as there is perseverance, you will become a master of grass skiing

    2008-04-10 11:26:23 補充:

    Or you can rewrite it as (however, passive voice is not recommended)

    => So long as there is perseverance, you are believed to become a master of grass skiing.

    2008-04-10 12:17:05 補充:

    By the way, this sport is called "Grass Skiing", not "Grass Skating". Please see Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grass_skiing

    參考資料: Myself. Studied English abroad at the age of 11. Tutored English as an Undergrad. A project manager in the US., Myself. Studied English abroad at the age of 11. Tutored English as an Undergrad. A project manager in the US since 1992.
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