請幫我翻成英文可以嗎 謝謝 關於西藏的
- ClaudiaLv 61 0 年前最佳解答
Tibetans just pursuit freedom--They just want to go "home"! Tibetan people have been forced to be exiled from home land for long time. They would like to claim their desire of human rights while internally focusing on Olympic Games in Beijing; however, they are bloodily suppressed by China military and more than eighty Tibetans died.
International society is rooting for Tibetans but China officials say they did not suppress Tibetans and even none of bullets were shot! (but the press revealed the violence of China government.)
China cut internet access and restricted the investigation from foreign journalists.
The massacre on Tibetans are getting more and more severe! This is the China government, who disregard human rights with autarchical violence.參考資料： 自己的大腦，保證沒有用翻譯軟體！
- 1 0 年前
- ElisaLv 71 0 年前
Both #1 and #2 are good. I would like to point out a few typos or errors from both.
=>Tibetans just want to be free! (error: two verbs in one sentence.)
=>focusing on (at is not right).
=>Olympic is an adj. Olympics means Olympic games
- To be continued -
2008-04-03 00:58:20 補充：
=> repress is a verb. You should use a noun here (repressibility).
=>Supports came (use past tense). fired a single bullet (use past tense)
for a long time. (need to add "a").
even none of the bullets were shot! (need to add “the”)
- To be Continued -
2008-04-03 00:59:55 補充：
who disregards human rights. (disregards: add “s” for present tense for a singular noun)
For #3, please check out your source of news for accuracy as the majority of them came from China.
- 1 0 年前
2008-04-02 00:07:08 補充：
是一句一句的，所以在文法上會有 Fragment (不完整的句子)，除此之外不會有文法錯誤，也都看得懂喔。
Tibetans are just want to be free!! To go home!!
They have been forced to exile for a long time.
When the world is focusing at China due to Bei-Jing Olympic, they wish to express their desire of Tibetan Human Rights.
But the China's military repress have killed more than 80 people mercilessly.
Supports come from over the world. However, Chinese Government said that they didn't suppress them or even fire a single bullet. <But such violent act has been discovered by media>
Disconnecting internet connection, controlling entry (of Tibet, 如果你相專注在西藏的話), and limiting investigations by reporters from other country.
Till today, the situation of Tibet Massacre is worsen dramatically.
Such violence is how Chinese Autocracy unreasonably neglects Human Rights!!
2008-04-03 22:59:30 補充：
Thanks a lot. I shall be more careful with my answers.
- 1 0 年前
可是也不要太口語 就是隨便的語氣啦 呵呵