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20點!!!!急!!請幫我訂正我的英文文法與內容,謝謝!!

以下是我寫的英文句子,請幫我更改讓句子文法正確,更順暢

謝謝你!!!有不懂的地方,下面有中文可參考.

Some american mentality movement discover,women can know teacher mean batter, and operate.man appear like to quarrel and take a risk.

Amaeican educate center discover about junior high school results and community ability, except language math,women's society work art, schoolmedia batter than men.

But in the study barrier and in the mood unstable aspect population proportion, the male student respectively is 73% and 76%, is higher than the female student by far 27% and 24%.

The male student accounts for the schoolwork not good student total the majority, moreover in which has 1/3 to think discontinues studies,

85% once have moved the murder thought, many people have attempted the narcotics, compares with on century 70's, male student's suicide rate also multiplied two.

In the physiological aspect, the usual man comparatively early dies,

Taiwan masculine life difference female five years old. Then, but also

some many high dangerous healthy custom,

like pulls out the tobaccohe, drinks, causes the high risk

disease, fatal, like heart blood vessel, stroke heart failure.

The research investigation demonstrated that, male student crime rate quite high, the male student is not easy to say the concern, is easy

the melancholia, the suicide rate high, also is easy to succeed

美國一些心理機構的調查發現,女生能夠更好地理解教師的意圖,更好地配合、服從。而男生則顯得更加反對權威,喜歡爭吵和冒險。

美國國家教育統計中心的一項針對全美中學學生成績和社會能力所做的調查顯示,除了在語文和數學成績上男女生基本持平外,在參與社會工作、藝術活動、校園媒體、學術俱樂部等方面,女生已經全面超越男生。而在學習障礙和情緒不穩定方面的人數比例上,男生分別是73%和76%,遠遠高於女生的27%和24%。男學生佔功課不好的學生總數的大部分,而且其中有1/3想過輟學,85%曾動過謀殺的念頭,很多人嘗試過毒品,與上個世紀70年代相比,男生的自殺率也翻了兩番。

在生理方面,通常男人較早死,台灣男性壽命差女性五歲。然後,還有許多高危險的健康習慣,如抽菸、飲食、喝酒,導致高風險疾病,致命,如心臟血管、中風心臟衰竭。

研究調查顯示,男生犯罪率比較高,男生不容易說出心事,容易得憂鬱症,自殺率較高,且容易成功

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    美國一些心理機構的調查發現,女生能夠更好地理解教師的意圖,更好地配合、服從。而男生則顯得更加反對權威,喜歡爭吵和冒險。

    According to some of the institution in America, they have discovered that girls can comprehend and cooperate the teachers' purposes better. However, the boys appear to be pugnacious, quarrelsome and venturesome.

    美國國家教育統計中心的一項針對全美中學學生成績和社會能力所做的調查顯示,除了在語文和數學成績上男女生基本持平外,在參與社會工作、藝術活動、校園媒體、學術俱樂部等方面,女生已經全面超越男生。

    Amaeican education center has a statistic survey about the grades and social ability in all the High Schools in America. Except language and math, girl's abilities of society work, art, and schoolmedia are exceeding the boys.

    而在學習障礙和情緒不穩定方面的人數比例上,男生分別是73%和76%,遠遠高於女生的27%和24%。男學生佔功課不好的學生總數的大部分,而且其中有1/3想過輟學,85%曾動過謀殺的念頭,很多人嘗試過毒品,與上個世紀70年代相比,男生的自殺率也翻了兩番。

    In the proportion of studying handicap and unstable mood aspect, the male students are respectively 73% and 76% which are much higher than the female students'. The male students are mostly the ones with lower grades. Moreover, 1/3 students have been thinking about drop out and 85% once have the thoughts of murder. Many students have used drugs. Comparing with the century of 70's, male student's suicide rate was also two times the rate they had before.

    在生理方面,通常男人較早死,台灣男性壽命差女性五歲。然後,還有許多高危險的健康習慣,如抽菸、飲食、喝酒,導致高風險疾病,致命,如心臟血管、中風心臟衰竭。

    In the physiological aspect, men comparatively die early. The masculine vitality was less than feminine about five years old. Besides, there are some highly dangerous habits. For instance: tobaccohe and drinks will cause the highly fatal disease such as heart blood vessel disease or heart stroke.

    研究調查顯示,男生犯罪率比較高,男生不容易說出心事,容易得憂鬱症,自殺率較高,且容易成功

    The research demonstrates that male students' crime committing rate was high. The male students are taciturn about their concern which make them become melancholy, and easily committing suiside.

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