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A Memorable School Anniversary Day

The most memorable school anniversay day took place at the junior

high i used to study.Tracing back to the time when i was a first grader,

everything happened very sudden and was out of my expectation,because it was the first one i had.Therefore,the visual excitement was dizzling,it could'nt cover the delightful rythm of the Baroque-styled classical music, composed by a well-known 17th-century composer who paved the way for the generation of the rennaisance .It symbols our school

like a band marching towards an unreachable goal.

It gave me a quite unique impression in the times of my adolescence.

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    A Memorable School Anniversary (no Day)

    The most memorable school anniversay (no day) took place at the junior

    high (I) (attended before).Tracing back to the time when (I) was a first grader,

    everything happened (so suddenly or so quickly) and was out of my expectation,because it was the first one (I) had.Therefore,the visual excitement was (dizzily),it (couldn't) cover the delightful rythm of the Baroque-(style) classical music, composed by a well-known 17th-century composer who paved the way for the generation of the (Renaisance) .It (symbolizes )our school

    like a band marching (toward) an unreachable goal.

    It gave me a quite unique impression in the (time) of my adolescence.

    2008-04-13 20:44:55 補充:

    ...........took place at the junior high (shool)........................

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