My name is alex, I come from Taiwan. From now on , I am in Australia with my working holiday visa. I am serious for my individual character and character optimism, aggressive, work earnest and be responsible for. I hope can to going new company work in corporate team.
- Alex DuLv 41 0 年前最佳解答
你好, 很巧, 我也叫Alex, Let me see your resume.
1. I am serious for my... , be serious+about/in , serious後面要加
about 或 in , 解釋為"我對我的人格/個性事認真的"
2. work earnest => 動詞work後應加副詞,
work earnestly: (熱誠地)誠摯地工作
3. be responsible for(負責) :不可單獨這樣使用
要說: I am responsible for my job. 我對我的工作負責
或者: I am a responsible person. 我是個負責任的人
後面可加: So I always finish my work, before resting.
4. I hope can to going new company work in corporate team.
這句恕我直言, 毫無文法喔! 更正如下:
I hope that I can work in a new company with my team members.
I love team work. I will get along with my partners.
翻譯如下: 我希望我能在一家新公司工作, 跟我的團隊一起
工作. 我喜愛團隊工作. 我能跟我的工作夥伴和睦相處.
My job experiences are...., 我的工作經驗有....
或是: I have ever worked in ....., 我曾經在哪裏工作過....
6. 學歷的部份: 例如: I graduated from Taiwan University.
我畢業於台灣大學, My major is XXX. 我主修XXX
就是讀什麼科系, 例如電機, 機械, 工管, 化工....等等
7. 回到第二句: I come from Taiwan. 我來自台灣
可再加地名, 如: I come from Taiwan Taipei. 我來自台灣台北
你是在澳洲遊學吧? 我表妹現在也在那喔! 希望這對你有幫助參考資料： me
- dynastyflierLv 71 0 年前
To whom it may concern,
My name is Alex and I am from Taiwan. At this time, I am in Australia with my working holiday visa.
For my personality, I am quite serious and also an optimestic person, not to mention I am aggrtessive, working honestly and also responsible.
I hope I can obtain a responsible job in your company and to be part of your working force.
Thank you for your time for reviewing my resume.
*** <-- your name參考資料： ~Self~