小賢 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

急~~英文高手幫忙修改履歷表

這是我的簡單履歷表主要是要去農場打工用的只是想表答工作認真努力...等等意思,是否要修改或增加呢?

My name is alex, I come from Taiwan. From now on , I am in Australia with my working holiday visa. I am serious for my individual character and character optimism, aggressive, work earnest and be responsible for. I hope can to going new company work in corporate team.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    你好, 很巧, 我也叫Alex, Let me see your resume.

    首先請把你的名字大寫:Alex

    1. I am serious for my... , be serious+about/in , serious後面要加

    about 或 in , 解釋為"我對我的人格/個性事認真的"

    character不需要兩次, 第二個可以刪掉

    2. work earnest => 動詞work後應加副詞,

    work earnestly: (熱誠地)誠摯地工作

    3. be responsible for(負責) :不可單獨這樣使用

    要說: I am responsible for my job. 我對我的工作負責

    或者: I am a responsible person. 我是個負責任的人

    後面可加: So I always finish my work, before resting.

    我總是完成工作後才休息

    4. I hope can to going new company work in corporate team.

    這句恕我直言, 毫無文法喔! 更正如下:

    I hope that I can work in a new company with my team members.

    I love team work. I will get along with my partners.

    翻譯如下: 我希望我能在一家新公司工作, 跟我的團隊一起

    工作. 我喜愛團隊工作. 我能跟我的工作夥伴和睦相處.

    5. 可附帶提及你有哪些工作經驗:

    My job experiences are...., 我的工作經驗有....

    或是: I have ever worked in ....., 我曾經在哪裏工作過....

    6. 學歷的部份: 例如: I graduated from Taiwan University.

    我畢業於台灣大學, My major is XXX. 我主修XXX

    就是讀什麼科系, 例如電機, 機械, 工管, 化工....等等

    7. 回到第二句: I come from Taiwan. 我來自台灣

    可再加地名, 如: I come from Taiwan Taipei. 我來自台灣台北

    你是在澳洲遊學吧? 我表妹現在也在那喔! 希望這對你有幫助

    參考資料: me
  • 1 0 年前

    To whom it may concern,

    My name is Alex and I am from Taiwan. At this time, I am in Australia with my working holiday visa.

    For my personality, I am quite serious and also an optimestic person, not to mention I am aggrtessive, working honestly and also responsible.

    I hope I can obtain a responsible job in your company and to be part of your working force.

    Thank you for your time for reviewing my resume.

    Sincerely yours,

    *** <-- your name

    參考資料: ~Self~
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