Pink Angel 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

考應用藝術研究所的自我介紹~麻煩幫我看一下(急)

明天就要面試了

實在不想出錯

誰可以幫我看一下嗎

拜託~~~我只是希望有人幫我看有沒有錯誤(急)

或者幫我修改增加都可以

謝謝

英文======>就是這裡~~麻煩大家了~~幫幫我~謝謝

I'm a student who major in Russian language at the National Chengchi University. Russian is one of the outstanding BRIC , and widespread of population are speaking in Russian language , that is why i choose it as my major. Besides , I study Japanese language , because Russian and Japan are countries that near Taiwan and they have special relationship with us. And I am particularly interested in the puissant and elegant culture of Japan , so I passed Level 4 , of the Japanese-Language Proficiency Test last year. I believe that my views are broaden by learning them. In the other hand I often study English, so I did well on my English courses at university.

I still had lessons “Media and Socialization” and “Mass media and dissemination” , I hope I can calculate and understand what people think about. Besides, I studied Economics and Civil laws , in order to understand framework of Economics and laws.

During my university, I did many part-time job. I was a telephone operator at cram school and an upbringing . Getting along with others makes me more patient and my conversation become clear presentation.

Talking about my personality, I think my advantage is hardiness and resistance, if I decide to work it out and I will handle it. I won't let my personal contagion affecting my daily life.

I have talent in languages , besides , I think my design specialty isn't bad . I can always take good result position in art and composition competes since childhood. I want to be attributed to my mother, she always let me attend art and music skill classes, therefore laying the foundation of my tasty.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    文章修正如下,請參考:(括符內為更正處)

    (I major in) Russian language at the National Chengchi University. Russian is one of the outstanding BRIC(s) , and widespread of population are speaking in Russian language , that is why(I) (chose) it as my major (subject). Besides , I study Japanese language , because Russian and Japan are countries that near Taiwan and they have special relationship with us. And I am particularly interested in the puissant and elegant culture of Japan , so I passed Level 4 (去除 , ) of the Japanese-Language Proficiency Test last year. I believe that my (view) are broaden by learning them. In the other hand (,)I study English (often), so I did well (have a good job)on my English courses (in) university.

    I still had lessons (as or like)“Media and Socialization” and “Mass media and dissemination” , I hope I can calculate and understand what people think about. (and) I studied Economics and Civil laws , in order to understand (the) framework of Economics and laws.

    During (I was learning in) university, I (got) many part-time job(s). I was a telephone operator at cram school and an upbringing . Getting along with (other people) makes me more patient and my conversation become (more) clear (and fluent).

    (Regarding) my personality, I think my advantage is hardiness and(persistence), if I decide to work (something) out and I will handle it (constantly). I won't let my personal contagion affecting my daily life.

    I have talent in languages , (and) my design specialty isn't bad . I (去除 can) always take good (去除 result) position in art and composition competes since (my) childhood. (I think I should) (attribute) to my mother, (because) she (kept) (letting) me attend art and (musical) skill classes, (so I can contrustructed my good tasty base).

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    2008-04-17 16:43:07 補充:

    再修正一處

    I think I should attribute (it) to my mother

    2008-04-18 16:11:15 補充:

    巴西(Brazil)、俄羅斯(Russia)、印度(India)和中國(China),合組其英文起首字母,我們稱之為BRICs,金磚四國。 ... 屆時,現有的六大工業國(G6),只剩美國與日本, 英、德、法、義將被淘汰出局,金磚四國成為新經濟強權。 ...

    以上節錄自「商業周刊」,BRIC雖指四國,且由四國國名第一個字組成,但BRIC 已自成一字(代號),好如中文把它看成英文之bric 磚一樣,已是一代號,四個國家有「金磚」的特性,不只一國是「金磚」,故須加s ,使用複數。

    2008-04-18 17:15:30 補充:

    have a good job 請改為 had a good job

  • 1 0 年前

    BRIC = 金磚四國 也就是 巴西 俄國 印度 中國

  • 1 0 年前

    很高興為您解答

    您的中文如下

    括號的是看不懂您的英文:)

    我是少校用俄語在全國(Chengchi) 大學的學生。俄語是卓著的(BRIC) 的當中一個, 並且普遍人口講話用俄語, 是為什麼我選擇它作為我的少校。其外, 我學習日語, 因為俄語和日本是在臺灣附近和他們特別與我們有合作關係的國家。並且我是特別對日本感興趣(puissant) 和典雅的文化, 因此我去年通過了平實4, 日本語言熟練測試。我相信, 我的意圖是變寬由學會他們。在另一手我經常學習英語, 因此我很好做了在我的英國課在大學。我仍然有教訓"媒介和社會化" 和"大眾傳播媒體和傳播", 我希望我能計算和明白什麼人民認為。其外, 我學習經濟和民法, 為了瞭解經濟和法律框架。在我的大學期間, 我做了許多半日工作。我是電話接線員在填入學校和養育。取得進展在其他人上做我更多患者並且我的交談成為清楚的介紹。談論我的個性, 我認為我的好處是耐勞性和抵抗, 如果我決定工作它並且我將處理它。我不會讓我的個人傳染影響我的日常生活。我有天分在語言, 其外, 我認為我的設計專業不是壞。我能總接受好結果職位在藝術並且構成競爭從童年。我想要歸因於我的母親, 她總讓我上藝術和音樂技巧組, 因此打基礎我鮮美。

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