幫我訂正英文 part 3

Why did the Chinese men have the argument about foot-binding women during the 20th century? Thesis: the men did not want the women who had the foot-binding because these people got the Western education and studied abroad outside of China such as Kang Youwei. The footbinding was the barbaric custom to the... 顯示更多 Why did the Chinese men have the argument about foot-binding women during the 20th century?
Thesis: the men did not want the women who had the foot-binding because these people got the Western education and studied abroad outside of China such as Kang Youwei. The footbinding was the barbaric custom to the foreigner. During the 20th century, the biggest women emancipation was May Fourth movement which helped women unbound their feet. These people were made by the college students in May Fourth movement. They advanced freedom and equality for women and country. Hong pointed that the May Fourth Movements reflected the Western theories which are brought democracy, equality and freedom for Chinese women (293). He described the anti-footbinding doubted Confucianism and spread the Chinese women social eyesight in society. Hong showed May Fourth movement gave the women future and new possibilities ways to go, but the movement could not cover all women of “physical, economic, cultural and political liberation” (291).
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