英文作文中,文法的問題!

大大: 最近練習了一下作文, 大大可以告知我以下哪個地方文法有問題或有錯字? 謝謝! If Taiwanese manufacturers want to continue to develop Taiwan as a base to try to enhance the core competitiveness to a higher value-added product design related fields, in the transition process, there are many design-related businesses because of the lack of... 顯示更多 大大:
最近練習了一下作文,
大大可以告知我以下哪個地方文法有問題或有錯字?
謝謝!

If Taiwanese manufacturers want to continue to develop Taiwan as a base to try to enhance the core competitiveness to a higher value-added product design related fields, in the transition process, there are many design-related businesses because of the lack of experience, not in accordance with the lead the successful completion of the established scheduling product development and delays in the ad hoc product time to market.
更新: 大大:
我是根據以下中文翻譯寫成英文的啦!
有沒很多錯誤?


台灣廠商若想要以台灣為根據地繼續發展,必須設法將核心競爭力提升至較高附加價值的產品設計之相關領域,在轉型的過程中,有許多企業因為設計相關的經驗不足,導致無法按照既定排程順利完成產品開發專案而延誤產品上市的時間。
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