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~~關於企業租車Enterprise資料的改正

如題~

這是從企業租車資料裡的一小段

希望英文高手可以幫忙改正

Enterprise had grown by focusing on insurers and their close collaborators, auto repair shops, and currently received one-third of its total revenue, around $3 billion from U.S. insurers。

以下是我自己翻的:

企業租車藉由把焦點放在承保人和他們相關的合作者,汽車修理商店,目前的收益大概是1/3的總收入,約三十億元來自美國的保險公司

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  • 1 0 年前
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    你翻得很好啦

    我幫你再改順一點

    Enterprise had grown by focusing on insurers and their close collaborators, auto repair shops, and currently received one-third of its total revenue, around $3 billion from U.S. insurers。

    企業租車藉由把焦點放在保險業務和與他們密切合作的汽車修理廠,這幾項業務目前約佔了總收入的1/3,而約有三十億元是來自於美國的保險業務

    參考資料: 靠自己一句一字翻的
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