I think the most important news is president Ma won an election.That means Taiwan is a party transition in the government again due to the result of 2008 election. President Ma is handsome, so I’m very happy when I hear he won this election.
The second important news for me is the actress died on February 19, 2008. I often watch her movie when I was in elementary school. She is bright and optimistic. I’m sad and crying to hear this news.
The oil’s price got the top. I remember few years ago that some people calculate oil’s price will get US$100 in 2010. But the calculation is coming early. We should confront the news and protect earth.
- KuangLv 41 0 年前最佳解答
In my opinion, the most important news (which) I think is (that) the presidential candidate Ma who won the Presidential Election. That means/represents (that) the party reshuffle again as a result of/on accountof/dueto/owingto/thanksto/becauseof the election result. Ma is handsome, so I'm very happy when I heard he win the election.
1. 總統候選人：a presidential candidate
2. 總統大選：the Presidential Election
3. who ... Presidential Election是以修飾the presidential candidate Ma
5. 依據您的意思應該為「政黨輪替」，a party transition transition，但國外新聞上常用a party reshuffle這個字。（reshuffle為洗牌之意）
6. 表示由於、因為：as a result of/on accountof/dueto/owingto/thanksto/because of + N/V-ing
7. 因為大家都知道2008年選舉結果，所以不用提到2008只要寫the election result即可
The second oneis (that)the actress drying/who died on February 19, 2008. I have watched her movie since/when I was in elementary school. She was bright and optimistic. On/Upon hearing this bad news, I cried with sorrow.
1. 由於前面已提過了the most important news，避免累贅則使用one代替
As soon as + S + V + …, S + V + …
On/Upon + (one's) + N/V-ing, S + V + …
S + had hardly/scarcely + Vp.p. + when/before + S + V-ed
S + had no sooner + Vp.p. + than + S + V-ed = No sonner + had + S + Vp.p. + than + S + V-ed（以否定詞引導的倒裝句）
6. with可翻譯成因為/附帶/有…；如喜極而泣：cry with joy，with就翻譯成因為
2008-04-27 17:02:29 補充：
The oil price has reached/come to the top. I remember that few years ago some experts predicted (that) theoil price will rise toUS$100 in 2010. But theirpredication has come true early. In conclusion, we have to value this issueas well as exert ourselves to protect our enviornment.
2008-04-27 17:03:03 補充：
* 1-1. 油價用the oil price就可以了
* 1-2. 油價已經達到高潮，所以用完成式
* 2. 達到常用reach (vt.) 或come to
* 3. 高潮top的同義字：peak/summit/apex/zenith/pinnacle（但字意仍有些差別），不過在新聞英語上常用peak/summit/apex反而比較少用top
* 4. 我記得…應該是「現在記得」吧所以few years ago放在that字句裡
2008-04-27 17:03:16 補充：
* 5-1. 依據意思應該為「預估」石油的價格，因此用predict/estimate/evaluate
* 5-2. 「some people」預估油價會漲?哪些人?應該是「專家」預估，所以改成expert
2008-04-27 17:03:27 補充：
* 6. 石油價格將變成每桶100美金，漲到100美金會比較好，因此用rise (vi.)，由於rise為不及物動詞，須與to連用
* 8-1. 我們應該面對這新聞以及保護地球? 應該是「我們必須重視這則議題並且極力保護環境」
2008-04-27 17:03:31 補充：
* 8-2. 這句既然是結論句那前方建議加入「總之」，也就是說「總之我們必須重視這則議題並且極力保護環境」
* 8-3. 總之…：In conclusion/To sum up/ On the whole/By and large/On balance/All in all, S + V + …
* 8-4. 重視：value/prize/lay emphasis on/put emphasis on/place emphasis on（on等於upon可以換upon）/emphasize
2008-04-27 17:06:21 補充：
2008-04-27 23:08:34 補充：
第三則文章假若要跟前兩則呼應的話，前面請加入Thirdly, the oil price has reached/come tothe參考資料： 英文雜誌
- 1 0 年前
I think the most important news is about the winning of Ma's presidentail election, which also marks the party relay. President My is handsom. I was very happy when I heard he won the election.
The second one impressed me mush was the death of one of my favorite actresses on February 19, 2008. I saw tons of her movies when I was in elemetary school. Her charisma and optimism made me so sad that I cried when I heard the news.
The gas pirce is soaring. A few years ago, some people expected the gas price to be up to US$100 in 2010, but now it's far beyond that price. I guess all we can do is confront the problem.
- 1 0 年前
I thought the most important news is XXX President won an election. That means Taiwan is a party transition in the government again due to the result of the election in 2008. XXX President is handsome, so I had been very happy when I heard he won this election.
The second important news for me is an actress died on February 19, 2008. The actress is XXX. I often watch her movies when I was an elementary school student. She was always bright and optimistic. I’m sad to hear this news.
The oil price is higher and higher. I remember some people calculated the oil price will get US$100 in 2010. But the result is coming early. We should face the problem and protect our earth.
2008-04-27 14:35:40 補充：