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英文短文(很短)可以幫我檢查一下嗎~急急急!!

拜四要報告,自己寫的不知道對不對,老師超 care chinese englis因為他要我們找原文的可是我找不到就自己翻,麻煩幫我改一下,最好是口語化一點的!!><謝謝~~(不要推薦我翻譯軟體,會翻怪怪的

WORLD KALEIDOSCOPE

The world is so big and have many people.

we live in the earth,many things happen everydad.

("世界這麼大,有這麼多人生活在一起,每天都會發生很多

大概是這個意思,我想了好久~可不可以幫我改成順一點或意思完整一點的><)

Somethings are so crazing,superieing and intresting

that you can't imagine

(而有些事是妳意想不到的.瘋狂..驚喜.有趣的)大概是這個意思

some people or animals can do something(s?) that you can't believe,

such as a woman robs bank with chocolates.

or a chicken survives two days in freezer

(有些人或動物或做出一些不可置信的事,像是有一個女人竟然拿著巧克力搶劫銀行或是一隻雞關在冰箱2天竟然還活著!?)可以幫我改一下語氣或文句通順嗎?

do you koow Wolf and goat can be lover?

(你知道狼跟羊之間也可以相愛嗎?)這句好像怪怪?

do you know the robot also can play robot?

(你知道機器人也會拉小提琴嗎?)

NOW,we will show you !

(讓我來告訴你)

NOW,we will show you somethings that make you go "WOQ"

(現在讓我來告訴你一些會讓你驚訝的事)

some of the biggest surprises on the show,come from 新奇的事,that you did expect anyone to be working on .可以幫我改一下嗎><

謝謝大家><

已更新項目:

還有~我們是第1組這句要怎麼講?

是we are one grop嗎

2 個已更新項目:

今天我要告訴你們一些有趣的事

是today i will told you some intresting .嗎?

我們都知道是we all koow嗎?

3 個已更新項目:

我新奇的事那一句是想表達

有很多驚奇的事(或是有趣)是你意想不到(或是從未想過的

類似這種意思>

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  • Elisa
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    The World is like a Kaleidoscope.

    Our world is so big, full of people and wonders. You could never imagine the crazy, surprising and interesting events happening everyday. It is hard to believe in things like a woman robbing a bank with chocolates, and a chicken surviving in a freezer for two days.

    Do you know that a wolf can fall in love with a goat? Do you know that a robot can play violin?

    Now, let us tell you and show you things that will make you go "WOO".

    Some of the biggest surprises on the show came from wondrous things that you would never expect.

    還有~我們是第1組這句要怎麼講?

    是we are one grop嗎 ?

    => We are the first group.

    => We are group number one.

    今天我要告訴你們一些有趣的事

    是today i will told you some intresting .嗎?

    => Today, I would like to tell you something interesting.

    => Today, I would like to tell you some interesting things.

    我們都知道是we all koow嗎?

    => We all know that ……

    For example: We all know that sun rises in the east.

    ** wondrous = 令人驚奇的.

    參考資料: Myself. Studied English abroad at the age of 11 with over 32 years of experience speaking and writing English. Tutored English as an Undergrad. A project manager in the US since 1992.
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  • 1 0 年前

    How huge the world is that so many human beings live together and everything is possibly happened everyday.

    ("世界這麼大,有這麼多人生活在一起,每天都會發生很多)

    Some things are just crazy, suprising and interesting

    which are out of your expectation.

    (而有些事是妳意想不到的.瘋狂..驚喜.有趣的)

    Many things are just incredible but truly happened in our living such as a female robber even carried chocolates while robbing a bank and a chicken survived in a freezer for two days long.

    (有些人或動物或做出一些不可置信的事,像是有一個女人竟然拿著巧克力搶劫銀行或是一隻雞關在冰箱2天竟然還活著!?)可以幫我改一下語氣或文句通順嗎?

    do you know a wolf could fall in love with a goat?

    (你知道狼跟羊之間也可以相愛嗎?)這句好像怪怪?

    do you have idea that the robot could play violin as well?

    (你知道機器人也會拉小提琴嗎?)

    NOW,let us(me) show you !

    (讓我來告訴你)

    NOW,let us(me) show you some facts amazed you

    (現在讓我來告訴你一些會讓你驚訝的事)

    There are novel facts that you may never heard of before and out of your imagination.

    我們是第1組這句要怎麼講?

    We are the first group.

    今天我要告訴你們一些有趣的事

    I'm(We're) telling you some interesting affairs

    我們都知道是we all koow嗎?

    是的!也可以用We do know/ we know就可以了

    參考資料: my own
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  • Pogo
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    ("世界這麼大,有這麼多人生活在一起,每天都會發生很多

    大概是這個意思,我想了好久~可不可以幫我改成順一點或意思完整一點的><)

    The world is so big and is full of people; therefore, a lot of things happen everyday.

    (而有些事是妳意想不到的.瘋狂..驚喜.有趣的)

    Some things that happened are so crazy, uprising and interesting

    that you can never imagine.

    (有些人或動物或做出一些不可置信的事,像是有一個女人竟然拿著巧克力搶劫銀行或是一隻雞關在冰箱2天竟然還活著!?)

    Human or animals can do things that are unbelievable. Some woman robbed a bank with chocolates; a chicken was still alive after two days in freezer.

    (你知道狼跟羊之間也可以相愛嗎?)

    Do you know that wolves would fall in love with sheep?

    (你知道機器人也會拉小提琴嗎?)

    Do you know that robots can also play violins?

    (讓我來告訴你)

    Let me tell you,

    (現在讓我來告訴你一些會讓你驚訝的事)

    Let me tell you some things that will surprise you.

    Some of the biggest surprises come from things you did not expect people would do them. (你最後一句沒中文所以我不太清楚你想說什麼?)

    2008-04-30 01:24:01 補充:

    重寫最後一句:

    Some of the biggest surprises are so neat(新奇) that people will be dwelling on them day after days. (有些事情新其到人門會一直回想) 這是你要的意思嗎?

    還有~我們是第1組這句要怎麼講?

    We are group One.

    今天我要告訴你們一些有趣的事

    I would like to tell you some interesting things today.

    我們都知道是 We all know, 對的!

    參考資料: 住美國20年啦
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  • 潘北
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前

    The world is so big and have so many people.

    There are many things happened every day on the world.

    世界那麼大.人口這麼多。

    我們生活在地球上每天都有很多事情發生。

    Something are so crazy,surprising and interesting

    that you can't imagine.

    有些事情是那麼的瘋狂、驚奇和有趣到你無法想像的地步。

    some people or animals can do something that you can't believe,

    such as a woman robs a bank with chocolates.

    or a chicken survives two days in freezer

    (有些人或動物會做出一些令人無法置信的事,像是有一個女人竟然拿著巧克力搶劫銀行或是一隻雞在冰箱冰凍2天後竟然還活著!?)

    do you know Wolf and goat can be lover?

    (你知道狼跟羊之間也有可能會相愛嗎?

    do you know the robot also can play with robot?

    (你知道機器人也會和機器人玩嗎?)

    Let us show you !

    (讓我來告訴你吧!

    Now,we will show you something that could make you go "WOQ"

    (現在讓我來告訴你一些會讓你驚訝的事)

    some of the surprising shows come from novel things ,

    有些驚人的表演取材自新奇的事件。

    that you will expect anyone to be working on .

    將會讓你覺得欲罷不能。(或值回票價)

    還有~我們是第1組這句要怎麼講?

    是we are the first group.

    今天我要告訴你們一些有趣的事

    I will tell you some interesting things today.

    我們都知道是we all know嗎? ANS:yes

    你的句子有些我略作修改.供你參考.

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