麻煩英文達人幫我修改＆翻譯(中文那段)我的英文自傳 拜託了 orz
I am Shen, chiao-chieh, English name is Jessie, born on June 9, 1984, Pingtung, Taiwan and graduated from XX University. Even though I come from single parent and poverty family, I still consider myself very lucky. Because my grandmother and aunt take care of me, give me warmness and encourage me to pursue what I want, I really appreciate them.
About my Education background, I lived in Pingtung since I was a child then moved to Taipei until getting admission to the university that I applied to. I studied hard and my efforts have a result as expected. One thing that I felt accomplished was to get an admission of XX University department of Sociology by myself without going to cram school. Besides regular course, I even took marketing elective course in the university.
I like to learn and have courage to accept challenge. Hoping apply for a position which have potential and challenge. l could like to start from basic unit and follow company’s arrange to grow up and become professional agent step by step. My current plan is to learn English for listening and writing and to prepare TOEIC (expect myself approach 750 scores). Besides, I am interested in Japanese, so I am intend to learning it next year. In conclusion, the Account Manager is the foremost choice to me. I'm eager to contribute what I've obtained. I hope that my attributes can come up to the requirements of this position.
- HoosierLv 71 0 年前最佳解答
I am Shen, Chiao-chieh, my English name is Jessie. I was born on June 9, 1984 in Pingtung , Taiwan and graduated from XX University. Even though I come from single parent afmily and was quite poor. I still consider myself a very lucky person. Because my grandmother and aunt took good care of me, they give me warmness and encourage me to pursue what I want, I really appreciate them.
About my Education background, I lived in Pingtung since I was a child then moved to Taipei until being admitted to the university that I applied for. I studied hard and my efforts have relected in my grades. One thing that I am quite proud of is that I get admisssion form XX University department of Sociology by studing myself without going to cram school. Besides regular course in the Sociology department, I took many other elective courses in the university, such as marketing. While trying to maintain good grades in my classes, I worked many part-time jobs during my college career, such as waiting in restaurant, working as a surveyor for research studies, serving as assistant for web-seller. The surveyor job is quite difficult, however, I collected over 120% surveys that was assigned to me (by helping my fellow works and including the quota assigned to them, this can be verified with the Survey Center of Academic Sinica). In my job working as a web-sale assistant in the summer, I completed the key-in, coding and inventory of over 700 hundred items all by myself. This performance was highly appreciated by my supervisor and therefore he gave me a raise. Through this job, I learned the details of web-commerce. My first job after graduation is working as a research assistant, my duties are doing layout for books, producing Power-Point files and maintaining web-site.
2008-05-01 14:19:26 補充：
This performance was highly appreciated by my supervisor and therefore he gave me a raise. Through this job, I learned the details of web-commerce.
2008-05-01 14:19:46 補充：
My first job after graduation is working as a research assistant, my duties are doing layout for books, producing Power-Point files and maintaining web-site.
2008-05-01 14:20:40 補充：
I always try my best to fulfill the duties assigned to to me, and my boss has always been pleased with my performance. I like to learn new things and have the courage to accept challenge. I hope to apply for a position that has the potential to grow and have challenging tasks.
2008-05-01 14:21:11 補充：
l am willing to start from a basic position and follow company's arrangement to grow upward and become a professional agent step by step. My current plan is to improve my English listening and writing ability and to prepare TOEIC (I expect myself to approach score of 750).
2008-05-01 14:21:42 補充：
Besides that, I am interested in learning Japanese, which I intend to start next year. In conclusion, the Account Manager position is the foremost choice to me.
2008-05-01 14:21:55 補充：
I'm eager to contribute what I've obtained through my university education and my previous working experience. I hope that my attributes can meet the requirements of this position.
2008-05-01 14:22:50 補充：
不好意思 , 系統一直告知字數太長只要分段貼上
- 1 0 年前
Other than my decent marks in my academic life, I took some part-time jobs such as a waiter, a surveyor, and an assistant for internet-based auction. Especailly, it is queit demanding to be a surveyor because this job required me not only to interview subjects face to face but also to collect sufficient samples. Most importantly, I proactively took my coworker's responsibility when such coworker is not available. Besides, as an assiatant, I encoded and keyed in about 700 products by myself while my employer was short of time, thereby comprehending how to manage products and how to proceed internet-based auction, as well as obtaining appreciation from my employer. Then, after graduation, my first job was to be a research assistant. The main content of this job is to compile books, make ppt files, and maintain a website. I spared no effort to finish my tasks and my accomplishment extremely satisfied my later employer.
2008-05-01 13:58:08 補充：
my coworker was not avaiable.
the main content of this job was to ......
Sorry I use the wrong tense~~~參考資料： My own