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請英文不錯的大大再幫我check一下文法問題

如題,請英文好的高手幫忙檢視一下句子中的文法問題並幫我更正一下,謝謝!

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The Wii Perfect Shot Gun and the Wii Magnum Gun are basic design. The different of both is only their mold.

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The Wii Infrared Laser Magnum Gun, just attach the laser to add accuracy of shoot.

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In respect of the Wii Zapper, it is the newest. But it hasn’t specail in function.

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Finaly, the Wii is selling in Japan and America, but hasn’t sell yet in Taiwan, the time is advertise by official on June.

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請大大多多幫忙,十點請不要嫌少。

已更新項目:

1.Wii Perfect Shot Gun 和 Wii Magnum Gun 都是基本款,兩者只有造型上的不同。

2.Wii Infrared Laser Magnum Gun就是多了雷射,增加了射擊的準確度。

3.至於Wii Zapper,是最新的產品,但是功能上似乎沒什麼改變。

4.最後,wii已經在日本和美國上市一段時間,但是尚未在台販售。而官方公佈的上市時間是在六月。

第四句好像少了不少東西,麻煩大大幫我補充一下吧!

謝謝 lin_tsen 大大的指教!

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  • 俊達
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前
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    Wii Perfect Shot Gun and Wii Magnum Gun have same basic structure, and the different of both is only on their modeling.

    Wii Infrared Laser Magnum Gun just made by adding the laser which increases the accuracy of shoot to the basic structure.

    To the Wii Zapper, it is the latest product, but its functions have no further improvement from the basic structure.

    Finally, the Wii has sold in Japan and America for a period of time, but hasn’t yet to sell in Taiwan until June announced by official.

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  • 1 0 年前

    我建議你把中文打出來,像是第二句其實還蠻難懂的。

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