jennifer 發問時間： 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

# 急! 今天下午我需要教小孩這一篇文章！請幫我看一下有錯嗎？

At The Drugstore

This is a drugstore. Here’s some film and some sunscreen. This old woman is getting some medicine. Annie has some toothpaste in her hand. And she asks her mother how much the toothpaste is. “It’s two dollars.” her mother saying and giving her some money. This woman needs some soap for her little boy, because the little boy needs clean up. Oops! The two little boys are playing with makeup. Their mother run to them and stop. Loot at the Digger is chasing a gray dog in the drugstore.

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• 1 0 年前
最佳解答

文法上幾乎沒錯誤 但是有些部份我們國外用法不同 可以參考一下 (我把修正後的地方用大寫打上去)

At The Drugstore

This is a drugstore. Here’s some film and some sunscreen. This old LADY is getting some medicine. Annie has some toothpaste in her hand. And she asks her mother how much IS the toothpaste. “It’s two dollars.” her mother sayS and giving her some money. This woman needs some soap for her little boy, because the little boy needs TO clean up. Oops! The two little boys are playing with THE makeup. Their mother run to them and stop THEM. Loot at the Digger, WHO is chasing a gray dog in the drugstore.

• 1 0 年前

這篇文章好像很不通順說.....

第3行應該是her mother says and gives her some money 要用現在式

第5行because the little boy needs to be cleaned up 要改成被動 因為小男孩是

被清洗

第5行後面Their mother runs to them and stops 第3人稱動詞要加s

最後1句我不知道在寫啥 要通順的話最好把look at去掉

因為1句話裡不能同時存在2個動詞(look和is)

不然也可以改成Look!The Digger is chasing.........

2008-05-14 12:49:19 補充：

看了樓上大大說明後好像還有......

stops是及物動詞後面一定要接受詞所以要加them

makeup(化妝品)前面要加一個定冠詞the

Digger後面也是可以用關係代名詞who或whom或which(他是動物嗎?)

Loot at the Digger (who is) chasing a gray dog in the drugstore.

who is要加不加都可以

• 匿名使用者
1 0 年前

Here are some rolls of film and some sunscreen.

應該是“Annie has a tube of toothpaste in her hand” 吧？否則就會好像他的手上有一團牙膏.

正確的句子不應該用“and”或者“but”開始的。

She asks her mother how much the toothpaste is.

“It’s two dollars,”her mother answers, and gives her some money.

This woman needs some soap for her little boy, because the little boy needs to be cleaned up.

“Oh no！”可能會比“Oops”更適合。

Their mother runs to them and stops （them？）.

Look at the Digger chasing a gray dog inside the drugstore.

(什麽是digger？