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In our project, we are studying about e-commercials. In this semester we have find six types like costumes、cars、cell phone、action figures、restaurants and accessories.

Our project of future, we have some things want to do. First, Because in our group each other have a blog to save with our own type article、reflection and meeting record, we will make a website to link another information from our own blog. Second, We will find three of those types to make print advertisements like car、restaurant and action figure. We wants to find a good from each types and make a print advertisement to belong it is.

To sum up two things, we wants to use e-commercials to learn more vocabulary and making sentence than the before. We also wants because make print advertisements to advance our own create.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    In our project, we are studying e-commercials.

    In this semester,we had found six types like costumes, cars, cell phones, action figures, restaurants and accessories.

    Our project of future,(這句話的意思是?)

    we want to do something.

    First, because each member in our group has a blog to save our own type articles, reflections and meeting records, we will make a website which will link to our blogs.

    Second, We will find three of those types to print advertisements like cars, restaurants and action figures.

    We want to find a good sample from each types and make a print advertisement.

    To sum up, we want to use e-commercials to learn more vocabulary and make more sentence than before.

    Another reason is that using e-commercials help us make print advertisment more creative.

    有些看不太懂你想表達的意思

    我幫你修改了一下

    希望有幫助到你囉

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  • 匿名使用者
    5 年前

    到下面的網址看看吧

    ▶▶http://qoozoo201409150.pixnet.net/blog

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