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翻英~幫忙修改一下!有許多文法和用法的錯誤(2)

4.方便性:convenient

網路購物是足不出戶的消費者最好的購物管道。

If you want to stay at home. The shopping at network is your best

choice

只要準備好信用卡資料,打開電腦,接上網際網路,就可以看到全世界的東西,

So long as get the credit card ready, turn on the computer, and go to

the internet network, you can see anything in whole world.

不用擔心下雨天店沒開,

don't be afraid, If the shop has not opened in rainy day,

只要用手指移動滑鼠,在鍵盤上輸入你的個人資料,

so long as move your mouse with the finger, input your personal

materials on the keyboard,

數天後,貨物便送到府上等著簽收,不但方便更省下寶貴時間。

several days later, the goods are sent to your home and waited to sign

for, not only it is convenient to save valuable time even more.

另一方面,

On the other hand,

網際網路是動態的,畫面隨時可更新,即使新產品剛發表,

The internet network is dynamic, the picture can be upgraded at any

time

消費者也能立刻知道,搶鮮訂購使用,而不用耐心地等待宣傳上架後才可以買到。

When you have new product,The customer can be received in no time

網路購物當然也有缺點,

however, online shopping have some deficient too

但是由於它的方便性已遠遠勝過了一切。

but because its convenience has already far surpassed everything.

如何吸引客人how to the customer

廣告是非常重要的, 有漂亮的照片和商品的多樣性就可以吸引多客人

an advertisement are very impotanant if you have a beautiful picture

and have many products of different kinds, you will allurement a lot

of people

1.要有漂亮的照片nice picture

常常我們會看到一些商品圖片都是隨意放在桌上或是地上就直接拍攝,如果是小飾品、配件類的還可以,但是,賣家想要輕鬆把衣服賣掉,最好真人實彈穿上它拍照,才能讓買家清楚了解這件衣服!

we usually see many products picture were from put on the table or

floor, if it just a pretty-pretty, it is certainly, but if you want to received a large order , you will find the model to take the picture, let customer to understand this clothes.

2.提供良好的服務及優惠to provise good servise

如果買多件就可以享有折扣或是免運費的優惠,

when you take order a lots, you will to enjoy a discount or to exempt

portage.

另外還可以提供退換貨的服務,

And provise to return goods or to exchange goods.

2 個解答

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  • amigo
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    4.方便性:convenience

    網路購物是足不出戶的消費者最好的購物管道。

    Online purchase is the best (or: the mpost appropriate) channel for

    those consumers who seldom go out (or: who prefer to stay at home).

    只要準備好信用卡資料...

    Once (or: As soon as) you get your credit card ready, turn on the

    computer, and get connected to the internet, you can have a close

    look at all the product offerings from the world over.

    不用擔心下雨天店沒開,

    You do not need to worry about shopping on the rainy days when

    some physical shops are closed.

    只要用手指移動滑鼠,在鍵盤...

    A click on the mouse, keying in your personal data, and you will

    have the purchased goods delivered to your residence a few days

    later waiting for you to sign up for. This is not only convenient but

    even save a whole lot of your valuable time.

    另一方面,

    網際網路是動態的,畫面隨時可更新...

    On the other hand, the internet network is a dynamic mechanism,

    which ensures real-time updating of illustrated product offerings.

    It follows that consumers can get real-time information

    about any new products and enjoy the freshness of first-hand

    products and that it is not necessary for consumers to wait for the

    products to be put on the shelves after the bombardment of

    advertising messages.

    網路購物當然也有缺點,...

    However, although online shopping has some drawbacks, the

    advantage of convenience far exceed other disadvantageous factors.

    An appealing advertising slogan with eye-catching pictures and a

    whole variety of product items is of paramount importance so that

    many customers can be attracted to your website.

    [to be continued]

    2008-05-18 23:43:27 補充:

    [continued from above]

    1.要有漂亮的照片

    Nice and eye-catching pictures

    常常我們會看到一些....

    We often see many products are arranged on a table or on the gound in a careless way and illogical order when they are being photoed. It might be okay with small decorative items or accessories.

    2008-05-18 23:44:01 補充:

    But when talking higher end products like apparel, it is advisable to put them on charming models so that customers will be able to appreciate the fine texture and imagine how nice the clothes are when being put on themselves!

    2008-05-18 23:45:29 補充:

    2.提供良好的服務及優惠

    Providing first-rate service and special discounts

    如果買多件就可以享有折扣或是免運費的優惠...

    Special discounts or free delivery are available for large orders.

    Besides, we guarantee free replacement if unsatisfactory items are

    returned to us within the specified time limit.

    2008-05-18 23:46:49 補充:

    Hi, Miss Bunny

    Because the article is too long, I had to split it into three parts in order for the yahoo system to accept them.

    Wish you luck!

    jmclin8@yahoo.com.tw

    參考資料: myself, myself, myself, myself, myself
  • Pogo
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    4.方便性: Convenience

    網路購物是足不出戶的消費者最好的購物管道。

    If you prefer to stay at home, the online shoppong is your best

    choice

    只要準備好信用卡資料,打開電腦,接上網際網路,就可以看到全世界的東西,

    As long as you get the credit card ready, turn on the computer, and log on to the internet, you can see anything you want in whole world.

    不用擔心下雨天店沒開,

    You don't need to worry about stores being closed on rainy days.只要用手指移動滑鼠,在鍵盤上輸入你的個人資料,

    As long as you click the mouse with your finger, input your personal information.

    數天後,貨物便送到府上等著簽收,不但方便更省下寶貴時間。

    several days later, the items are delivered to your home and waited for your signature. It is not only convenient but also saves your precious time.

    另一方面,

    On the other hand,

    網際網路是動態的,畫面隨時可更新,即使新產品剛發表,

    The internet is dynamic, the pictures can be updated at any

    time. Even though it is a brand new product,

    消費者也能立刻知道,搶鮮訂購使用,而不用耐心地等待宣傳上架後才可以買到。

    Consumers can be informed right away, and start ordering it. They do not need to wait patiently for the new product to be displayed in stores.網路購物當然也有缺點,

    Of course there are drawbacks to online shopping;

    但是由於它的方便性已遠遠勝過了一切。

    nevertheless, its convenience outweights them.

    如何吸引客人 How to Attract Customers

    廣告是非常重要的, 有漂亮的照片和商品的多樣性就可以吸引多客人

    Advertisements are very impotanant. If you have beautiful ad pictures

    with varieties of products, you will be able to attract a lot of customers

    1.要有漂亮的照片 Nice pictures

    常常我們會看到一些商品圖片都是隨意放在桌上或是地上就直接拍攝,如果是小飾品、配件類的還可以,但是,賣家想要輕鬆把衣服賣掉,最好真人實彈穿上它拍照,才能讓買家清楚了解這件衣服!

    we usually see many product pictures were taken on the table or

    floor; if they are just accessories, it's fine; however, if you want to have many orders , it will be better for you to present your clothes on models.

    2.提供良好的服務及優惠 Good customer service and incentives

    如果買多件就可以享有折扣或是免運費的優惠,

    If they order more than one item they get discounts from it or free shipping. 另外還可以提供退換貨的服務,

    Also you can provide free exchanges.

    參考資料: laokoko
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