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4.方便性:convenient 網路購物是足不出戶的消費者最好的購物管道。 If you want to stay at home. The shopping at network is your best choice 只要準備好信用卡資料,打開電腦,接上網際網路,就可以看到全世界的東西, So long as get the credit card ready, turn on the computer, and go to the internet network, you can see anything in whole world. 不用擔心下雨天店沒開, don't be... 顯示更多 4.方便性:convenient
網路購物是足不出戶的消費者最好的購物管道。
If you want to stay at home. The shopping at network is your best
choice
只要準備好信用卡資料,打開電腦,接上網際網路,就可以看到全世界的東西,
So long as get the credit card ready, turn on the computer, and go to
the internet network, you can see anything in whole world.
不用擔心下雨天店沒開,
don't be afraid, If the shop has not opened in rainy day,
只要用手指移動滑鼠,在鍵盤上輸入你的個人資料,
so long as move your mouse with the finger, input your personal
materials on the keyboard,
數天後,貨物便送到府上等著簽收,不但方便更省下寶貴時間。
several days later, the goods are sent to your home and waited to sign
for, not only it is convenient to save valuable time even more.
另一方面,
On the other hand,
網際網路是動態的,畫面隨時可更新,即使新產品剛發表,
The internet network is dynamic, the picture can be upgraded at any
time
消費者也能立刻知道,搶鮮訂購使用,而不用耐心地等待宣傳上架後才可以買到。
When you have new product,The customer can be received in no time
網路購物當然也有缺點,
however, online shopping have some deficient too
但是由於它的方便性已遠遠勝過了一切。
but because its convenience has already far surpassed everything.
如何吸引客人how to the customer
廣告是非常重要的, 有漂亮的照片和商品的多樣性就可以吸引多客人
an advertisement are very impotanant if you have a beautiful picture
and have many products of different kinds, you will allurement a lot
of people
1.要有漂亮的照片nice picture
常常我們會看到一些商品圖片都是隨意放在桌上或是地上就直接拍攝,如果是小飾品、配件類的還可以,但是,賣家想要輕鬆把衣服賣掉,最好真人實彈穿上它拍照,才能讓買家清楚了解這件衣服!
we usually see many products picture were from put on the table or
floor, if it just a pretty-pretty, it is certainly, but if you want to received a large order , you will find the model to take the picture, let customer to understand this clothes.
2.提供良好的服務及優惠to provise good servise
如果買多件就可以享有折扣或是免運費的優惠,
when you take order a lots, you will to enjoy a discount or to exempt
portage.
另外還可以提供退換貨的服務,
And provise to return goods or to exchange goods.
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