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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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We___ (refer) to the cables___(exchange) between us recently, and ___ (be) pleased to ___ (conclude) business with you in the ___ (caption) goods. Under separate cover we___ (airmail) you our S/C No.1002 in duplicate, a copy of which ___ (sign and return) to us for files.

Emphasis ___(lay)on the point that the covering letter of credit ___ (open) in our favour through a first class bank. On receipt of the L/C we ___ (make) arrangements for shipment in time. We ___ (trust) that the shipment ___ (turn out) to your satisfaction.

Perhaps you ___ (note) that only a few transactions ___ (conclude) since business relations between us ___ (establish). Therefore, it ___ (hope) that you ___ (make) further efforst in your sales pushing. In the meantime we ___ (like) to ___ (recommend) you our Giant Brand Bicycle which ___ (be) a new product but ___ (gin) more and more popularity in the world market. A copy of our ___ (illustrate) catalogue ___ (enclose) for your reference. If this article ___ (be) of interest to you, please let us ___ (know) by return.

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  • amigo
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    1 0 年前
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    We_are referreing to or refer to_ (refer) to the cables_exchanged_

    (exchange) between us recently, and _ are_ (be) pleased to

    _conclude_ (conclude) business with you in the _captioned_

    (caption) goods. Under separate cover we_are airmailing or will

    airmail_ (airmail) you our S/C No.1002 in duplicate, a copy of which

    _ should be signed and returned or is to be signed and returned_

    (sign and return) to us for files. Emphasis _is laid_(lay)on the point

    that the covering letter of credit _should be or is to be opened_

    (open) in our favour through a first class bank. On receipt of the L/C

    we _will make_ (make) arrangements for shipment in time. We _trust

    _ (trust) that the shipment_ will turn out__ (turn out) to your

    satisfaction.Perhaps you _ should note_ (note) that only a few

    transactions _have been concluded_ (conclude) since business

    relations between us _was established_ (establish). Therefore, it _is

    hoped_ (hope) that you _will make_ (make) further efforst in your

    sales pushing. In the meantime we _would like_ (like) to _recommend

    _ (recommend) you our Giant Brand Bicycle which _is_ (be) a new

    product but _has gained_ (gin) more and more popularity in the

    world market. A copy of our _illustrated_ (illustrate) catalogue _is

    enclosed_ (enclose) for your reference. If this article _is_ (be) of

    interest to you, please let us _know_ (know) by return.

    2008-05-19 18:37:26 補充:

    Hi匿名

    Please note the following:

    1) There are some typos in your original text, such as

    -- make further efforst [effort]

    -- gin more and more popilarity [gain]

    2008-05-19 18:37:35 補充:

    2) There are different ways in expressing the same idea, so I have provided two answers for you to choose from. Usually, the first answer is the preferred one.

    Wish you luck!

    If you have further queries, feel free to write me.

    from: jmclin8@yahoo.com.tw

    2008-05-19 18:43:13 補充:

    Hi, 匿名

    My final comments:

    Althoughwell written, the original letter is kind of old-fashioned. Several trite words or cliche are used, but are not acceptable to modern writers any more.

    If you need further assistance, you are welcome to write to me.

    from: jmclin8@yahoo.com.tw

    參考資料: myself, myself, myself, myself
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