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(急件)幫忙修改英文文法

In our project, we are studying about e-commercials. In this semester we have been fond of six advertisement types and read them, they are costumes、cars、cell phones、action figures、restaurants and accessories. We have done these things in this semester. So in the future, we have something to do.

First, we will have been reading article of advertisement and not only learn sentence patterns but also special advertisement words from this. Second, In our group each member has a blog to keep with our own type article、reflection and a record of meeting so we will make a website to link the information to our blog. Inside this website, it have articles of advertisement, sentence patterns and advertisement words that we have read. In addition, we will report our reflection and a record of meeting that we done. Third, We will find three of those types to make print advertisements they are car、restaurant and action figure. We want to find a product from each types and make a print advertisement to belong it is. Inside the print advertisement, we will design something, they are to introduce function of product、selling point、price and page layout.

In this project, we hope we can improve our English by following points. We also hope that we have more interest in English and more understand in English by this project.

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    In our project, we are studying about e-commercials. In this semester we have (beenX) fond (ofX) six (advertisement→advertising) types and (have) read them, (which include) costumes、cars、cell phones、action figures、restaurants and accessories. We have done these things in this semester. So in the future, we have something to do.

    First, we will have been reading(你是要用末來完成式嗎?那要改成we will have read←p.p) (the) article (ofX→about) advertisement and not only (can we 要有主詞,倒裝)learn sentence patterns, but also special advertisement words from this.

    Second, In our group, each member has a blog to (keep with←是要寫記錄嗎?keep track with好像比較對) our own type(是打字的意思嗎?那要改成形容詞的typing歐。) article、reflection and a record of meeting, so (that) we will make a website to (linkX→我會建議用make a linkage念起來好像比較通) the information (toX←in) our blog. (InsideX← in) this website, it (haveX←has) articles (ofX←about) advertisement, sentence patterns and advertisement words that we have read. In addition, we will report our reflection and a record of meeting that we (have) done.

    Third, We will (find→不太好,我猜你大概是想寫「選」choose) three (ofX←from) those types to make print advertisements (theyX← , including) car、restaurant and action figure. We want to find (aX←one好像比較順,你覺得呢?) product from each (typesX→type) and make a print advertisement (toX←that) (belong it isX←belong是動詞,該改成belongs to it). (InsideX→in) the print advertisement, we will design something (,they are to introduceX→to introduce) function of product、selling point、price and page layout.

    In this project, we hope (we canX 兩個we念起來很怪吧?改成to 就好了) improve our English by (following? 你是指上述的,還是下述的?folloing的意思是下述的歐。可是你下面沒東西了,我猜你是想寫上述的,上述的可以用foremetioned) points. We (also, 放這裡很怪,乾脆不要,把「也」放句尾,如後) hope that we have more interest in English and more (understandX←understading才對) in English by this project (as well) → as well有「也」的意思,所以去掉also給as well 應該比較順。

    ps:文章寫得不賴,但是介系詞&關代的文法觀念比較弱。但是整體上來說你翻得還不錯,我覺得。

    參考資料: 多益930文法小小見解
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