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Copycat crime請幫我修改講稿

模仿犯罪是個由媒體所促成的社會議題,一些學者發現媒體暴

力會激勵或暗示人們的攻擊性進而促成人們犯罪,四分之一到

三分之一的男性暴力犯承認當他們做壞事時會從電視模仿犯罪

手法。除此之外,媒體傳播訊息和事件快速,雖然媒體只是要

讓人們知道這些令人傷心的事,然而因為媒體總是描述關於自

殺或做惡的細節,這種不良的現象變成教人們如何做他們沒想

過的不道德的事,而且這種現象會被循環,校園槍擊是一個典

型的例子。

Copycat crime is a social issue that made by media ,some scholars

have explored that media violence can inspire or hint offensive of

people then promote people to do evil.One fourth until one third of

male violent criminal who have recognized that imitating crime skills

from television when they were doing evils.Additionally ,media

spread information and events very fast,although the media just let

people know those terrible things;however,media always describes the

details about suicide or evil things.This unhealthy phenomenon

becomes teaching people how to do the unethical things which they

never thought of it.And this phenomenon would be recycled. School

shooting is a typical example.

以上是講稿 還沒完全完成 是一半而已 請幫我修正文法

可以的話 順便告訴我有沒有更口語話的寫法 因為是講稿@@

請不吝伺教 !

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To知識小霸王:

Copycat crime是維基百科也有的字耶

但還是謝謝你的指教

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Crime imitation (不是copy cat) is a social issue brought to our attention by the mass media.

    Scholars explored that media violence can encourage a person to act with violence

    About one third of the male audience admit that they imitate television programs when committing a crime

    Moreover, media's have been very selective in a negative way. They spread around negative and disappointing news at a very high speed. They emphasizes too much on details that people start learning from it. The classic example is campus shooting; more and more similar crimes have been committed since the first one has been reported.

    因為是演講 可以盡量減短扼要 太細節不用講 例如1/4-1/3..妳就講個大概1/3就可以了 這樣也比較不會納麼難懂

    2008-06-06 15:28:31 補充:

    They emphasizes too much on details AND people start learning from it.

    文法小錯誤 補充一下

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