Copycat crime is a social issue that made by media ,some scholars
have explored that media violence can inspire or hint offensive of
people then promote people to do evil.One fourth until one third of
male violent criminal who have recognized that imitating crime skills
from television when they were doing evils.Additionally ,media
spread information and events very fast,although the media just let
people know those terrible things;however,media always describes the
details about suicide or evil things.This unhealthy phenomenon
becomes teaching people how to do the unethical things which they
never thought of it.And this phenomenon would be recycled. School
shooting is a typical example.
以上是講稿 還沒完全完成 是一半而已 請幫我修正文法
可以的話 順便告訴我有沒有更口語話的寫法 因為是講稿@@
- 知識小霸王Lv 61 0 年前最佳解答
Crime imitation (不是copy cat) is a social issue brought to our attention by the mass media.
Scholars explored that media violence can encourage a person to act with violence
About one third of the male audience admit that they imitate television programs when committing a crime
Moreover, media's have been very selective in a negative way. They spread around negative and disappointing news at a very high speed. They emphasizes too much on details that people start learning from it. The classic example is campus shooting; more and more similar crimes have been committed since the first one has been reported.
因為是演講 可以盡量減短扼要 太細節不用講 例如1/4-1/3..妳就講個大概1/3就可以了 這樣也比較不會納麼難懂
2008-06-06 15:28:31 補充：
They emphasizes too much on details AND people start learning from it.