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一篇文章的文法 20point+

我寫了一篇關於iPod 的文章,為了做報告><

請各位高手幫忙看看有沒有文法的錯誤。

謝謝^^

III-1 iPod

What is iPod? This could listen to MP3, play videos with tiny size and large storage. The iPod has four models, iPod shuffle, iPod nano, iPod classic, and iPod touch. All of them could use iTune which bring you more colorful for your life.

The iPod shuffle looks like a common MP3, but it offers more convenient features. For example, it has the 2GB flash drive that could store more than 300 songs, skip-free playback design which could let you listen to music without lag anywhere, the battery indicator, and the shuffle model. And then, iPod shuffle’s battery could play 12 hours when fully charged. But the most convenient is its tiny and light, iPod is only 10.5mm depth and 15.6g weight that you could enjoy music anywhere.

The iPod nano is a small iPod with a big idea: Video. With the firmness and wafer-thin 6.5mm, it should play up to 5 hours of video or 24 hours of audio. The iPod has the great characteristic of each products-Click Wheel-that could make you easy to use the iPod. Use the Click Wheel, you could browse the album cover while you listen to music, adjust the volume, or flip your photos by slip your finger.

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  • Sigma
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    III-1 iPod

    What is iPod? It is a device for listening to MP3 and playing videos. It is characterized with tiny size and large storage. The iPod has four models, iPod shuffle, iPod nano, iPod classic, and iPod touch. All of them could use iTune, a software program that brings you more colors in your life.

    The iPod shuffle looks like a common MP3 player, but it offers more convenient features. For example, it has a 2GB flash drive that could store more than 300 songs. It's skip-free playback design could let you listen to music without lagging any any short section. It also has the battery indicator to show you how long it can play. The battery could play 12 hours when fully charged. The most convenient of all is its tiny and light weight. With only 10.5mm in depth and 15.6g in weight, you could enjoy music anywhere.

    The iPod nano is a small iPod with a big idea: video display, with a wafer-thin 6.5mm firmness design. It plays up to 5 hours of video or 24 hours of audio. All iPods are characterized with a great design, the Click Wheel, that could help you to use them easily. Using the Click Wheel, you could browse the album cover while listening to music, adjust the volume, or flip your photos with your fingers.

    參考資料: myself; 祝福心想事成
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