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There are two effects after you drunk driving. One is after you drunk driving; you still safe. The other is you have hurt somebody even though you don’t know.

If you are in condition one, I’ll say congratulations to you. You are so lucky, but that is the worst example to all citizens. This time you are safe not means next you will safe, too. Therefore, just remember "No drunk driving”.

On the other hand, if you drunk driving and you also get hurt or hurt somebody else in the traffic accident. Have you ever thought how much responsibility you have to pay? First, your driver’s license will invalidate. Second, you have to pay the ticket for drunk driving. Then, if someone or you get serious hurt in this accident by you who are drunk driving. Their family member and yours will be how much sad. The car accident will kill a lot of people, separate from people's wife and children, the whole family ruined.

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    Just two results would happen to you as you got drunk driving. Case 1, you'd sobered up to make a way home . Case 2, you've hurt somebody else unwittingly.

    Congratulations! You just get a ticket when the worst comes, or you are lucky to go unpunished. But good luck never comes twice. And so remind yourself of "No drunk driving”.

    Case 2. Suppose you get hurt or somebody else got hurt by you, or both of you were hurt. Do you know how much should you pay for all? Let me show you something. First, your license will be suspended and then you've got to pay the ticket. Moreover, if someone wounded or killed for your sake, you must make restitution to the victim's family and yours will be sad for what you've done. Car accidents would cause a lot of trouble, husband lost his wife, wife lost her husband, children become fatherless or motherless. Many families got devastated by just a car accident. Be careful, don't drive while you are drunk.

    2008-06-26 23:10:47 補充:

    I'm the one who read English every day. You won't like what I changed for your verses. However, I remind you that you've got to do in Britain as a Brit. Try your way to speak popular English. God bless you.

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