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My name is Bruce, a 24-year-old male. I am 5 feet and 4 inches tall. I weight 114.4 pounds. There are five people in my family. We have been living a happy life. I major in Department of Electrical Engineering and am going to graduate from National Formosa University.

I am confident of my skills, so I am able to work by myself. However, if I encounter difficulties, I will appreciate if anyone gives me directions or suggestions. My favorite old saying is "Time is money." As a result, it's my principle to be on time.

My English is above average.

Allow me to briefly introduce the computer skills which I have. I am good at the computer in both programming and designing.

With regard to programming, I am great at Visual Basic,MATLAB.

On the subject of visual arts, the preeminence of mine are PhotoImpact and PhotoShop.

In order to become more experienced, I am longing to put what I've learned into practice instead of sitting at home. Besides, it's my short-term goal to get certificates relating with what I am going to do as possible as I can. Moreover, for the purpose of keeping improving myself, I need to assimilate more knowledge and absorb myself in professional skills. By doing so, I can make efforts and contribute to the company.

I am available to discuss my background, experience and ability. Please contact me. Thank you for your time.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    My name is Bruce, a 24-year-old male. I am 5 feet and 4 inches tall. I weigh 114.4 pounds. There are five people in my family. We have been living a happy life. I major in electrical engineering and am going to graduate from National Formosa University this summer.

    I am confident of my skills, so I believe I can work by myself. However, if I encounter difficulties, I will appreciate it if anyone gives me advice or suggestions. My favorite old saying is "Time is money." As a result, it's my principle to be on time.

    My English is above average.

    Allow me to briefly introduce the computer skills which I have. I am good at both programming and designing.

    With regard to programming, I am great at Visual Basic and MATLAB.

    On visual arts, I am especially good at PhotoImpact and PhotoShop.

    In order to contribute to the company for which I work, I am eager to put what I've learned into practice at work instead of sitting at home. Besides, it's my short-term goal to get certificates relating to my prospective careers. Moreover, to keep myself growing, I always want to learn and I enjoy absorbing myself in acquiring professional skills. By doing so, I can have more experience, too.

    I am available to discuss my background, experience and ability in person with you. Please contact me. Thank you for your time.

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  • 1 0 年前

    My name is Bruce, 24-year-old male. I am 210 cm tall. Weight 78 kg. Five people in my family. We have been very happy life. Mainly in the Department of Electrical Engineering and graduates last year, the State University of Formosa.

    I believe that my skills, so I can, through their own work. However, if I encounter difficulties, I will calmly cope with handling all aspects, if someone gave me the instructions or recommendations. I am more focused on "time is money." As an encouragement, this is my principle is the right time.

    My English level is higher than the average.

    I briefly introduced the computer skills, I have. I am very good at computers in both the planning and design.

    For programming, I am great, in Visual Basic, MATLAB's.

    On the subject of the visual arts, excellence in the mine is photoimpact and Photoshop.

    I have contact with the past in more and more experience, I know I want to prove to all, rather than sitting at home in a daze. In addition, this is my future goals, obtain the relevant certificate and what I will do as much as possible, I can. Furthermore, in order to keep improving ourselves, I have to absorb more knowledge and absorbed in their own professional skills. I hope that the ability, I can make the efforts and contributions to the company unlimited help.

    I discussed all of my background, experience and ability. Please contact me. Thank you for your time.

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  • 1 0 年前

    Hello Bruce:

    Hope it helps.

    My name is Bruce and I am 24 years old. I weigh 114.4 pounds. I major in Electrical Engineering and I will be graduating from National Formosa University (this summer or fall..please fill in the time of graduation)

    I am confident with my skills. I work well both independently and within a team. I welcome and appreciate suggestions and directions offered by anyone when I encounter difficulities.

    The following is a brief introduction of my computer skills. I am good at both programming and designing. In the area of programming, I am excellent in Visual Basic, MATLAB. As for visual arts, my specialties are PhotoImpact and PhotoShop.

    I believe I will be an asset to the company and I am eager to apply what I have learned into practice. My short term goal is to obtain certificates relating to the career I am pursuing. Moreover, I will keep on acquiring new knowlege and skills to remain professional in what I do. It is important for me to continue learning and growing so my company can benefit as well.

    I am available to further discuss my qualifications. Please contact meat (phone number). Thank you for your time.

    Your Sincerely

    Su-Hui

    2008-07-14 05:20:22 補充:

    Hello Bruce:

    It`s Su-Hui. There has been a little typo mistake in the last sentence. Please put a space in between me and at. It's "contact me at", not "contact meat"

  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    老師.....非常感謝妳的幫忙.....感恩!

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