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I agree that face-to-face communication is the best manner than other categories of communication.

People can discuss the details directly.

People can negotiate right away instead of waiting the next conference.

People would not miss their messages easily.

I like to try new thins and take risks.

I can build up more experiences.

I can adapt easily to the new circumstance.

I can attain more learning opportunities than others.

I believe that success results from careful planning.

There must have an elaborate procedure to achieve success.

People might do some investigations about their schemes.

People try to avert taking any risks.

I agree that a person should never make an important decision alone.

People need plenty of suggestions from others.

People can decrease the probability to make a wrong mistake.

People can more easily to achieve success by sharing experiences from others.

I think that the company should give money to protect our environment.

The company can have better development in a better circumstance.

The company should have the concept of sustainability such as they teach their employees.

The company should feedback to the environment.

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  • 羅莉
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前
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    Herebelow are my suggestions following each of your sentences:

    I agree that face-to-face communication is the best manner than other categories of communication.

    → I agree that face-to-face communication is the best manner among all the categories.

    People can discuss the details directly.

    → People can discuss the details directly with one another.

    People can negotiate right away instead of waiting the next conference.

    → People can negotiate right away instead of waiting till the next conference.

    People would not miss their messages easily.

    → People would not miss their desired messages easily.

    I like to try new thins and take risks.

    → I like to try new things and take affordable risks.

    I can build up more experiences.

    → I can accumulate more experiences than doing otherwise.

    I can adapt easily to the new circumstance.

    → I can easily adapt myself to the new circumstance.

    I can attain more learning opportunities than others.

    → OK

    I believe that success results from careful planning.

    → I believe that success originates from careful planning.

    There must have an elaborate procedure to achieve success.

    → There must be an elaborate key to achieving success.

    People might do some investigations about their schemes.

    → People might make some investigations on their own schemes.

    People try to avert taking any risks.

    → People try to avert taking unnecessary risks.

    I agree that a person should never make an important decision alone.

    → I agree that one should never make an important decision alone.

    2008-07-27 00:02:10 補充:

    People need plenty of suggestions from others.

    → OK

    People can decrease the probability to make a wrong mistake.

    → People can decrease the possibility of making mistakes.

    2008-07-27 00:03:53 補充:

    People can more easily to achieve success by sharing experiences from others.

    → People can more easily achieve success by taking advantage of others' experiences.

    2008-07-27 00:04:24 補充:

    I think that the company should give money to protect our environment.

    → I think that the company should make a budget in protecting our environment.

    The company can have better development in a better circumstance.

    → The company can achieve better developments in a better environment.

    2008-07-27 00:05:23 補充:

    The company should have the concept of sustainability such as they teach their employees.

    → The company should stress the concept of sustainability in teaching their employees.

    The company should feedback to the environment.

    → The company should make significant feedbacks to the environment.

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