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要怎麼用英文說:這個短片是某某某跟他朋友一起做的...

我想把朋友的自製短片放到部落格上面,因為他本身有兩個樂團(吉他手),我想順便介紹他的團給其他人,所以影片描述那邊我想寫說:

"這個短片是AAA跟他朋友一起做的~並且AAA也是影片中的男演員~也是oooo跟xxxx的吉他手"

我只能想到"this short film was made by AAA and his friend, AAA is also the actor in the film who is the guitarist of oooo and xxxx"

可是怎麼看都不通順而且用法文法上好像有錯誤,請幫我想想要怎麼將這些話連成一句, 最好都不要斷掉, 用一句話通順的講出

另外"check out his bands at" : www.ooo(網址名稱)

這樣用法有錯嗎?用at是正確的嗎?

最後一個問題

有個朋友在他的youtube上傳很多樂團現場表演的影片,我覺得很精采,所以想要將他的youtube網址放在我的部落格上分享給其他人,我想打上他youtube的網址,然後寫說

"快看看他上傳的影片,他有很多好東西!" 之類的

要怎麼用英文表達呀??

請回答者隨時注意問題的更新~!

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給所有回答者;

那如果不要講說影片是誰導演的誰編劇的會不會比較好? 就是除掉made by whom

變成 the actor in this video clip named AAA who's also the guitarist of of oooo and xxxx"

可是延伸兩個問題

1.別人會不會以為我是在介紹'影片中角色名'叫做AAA, 而不是在介紹我朋友的真名呀??

2.我應該除掉"this short film was made by..."這段嗎? 除掉會不會介紹的不完全?

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給Victor:

可是把 and his friend放在最最後面好像有點怪呢

3 個已更新項目:

剛剛又想到了

如果講

this short film was made by AAA and his friend. he's the actor in the shore film also the guitarist of oooo and xxxx.

這樣可以嗎? 第二句開頭用代名詞he

然後用also連接演員跟吉他手

這樣用法正確嗎??

4 個已更新項目:

不好意思

再請問如果改成

The guy in this video clip named AAA who's the guitarist of of oooo and xxxx

這樣可以嗎?

別人會不會以為我是在介紹'影片中角色名'叫做AAA, 而不是在介紹我朋友的真名?

真不好意思問題很多>

5 個已更新項目:

還是The name of the guy in this short film is AAA

6 個已更新項目:

最主要是要介紹AAA跟他的樂團~~影片是其次

那是否就寫成

The actor in this video clip named AAA is the guitarist of of oooo and xxxx

這樣嗎??還是不太懂

7 個已更新項目:

The actor in this video clip named AAA is the guitarist of of oooo and xxxx

是說這句就可以了嗎?

還是指寫成這樣就可以↓

The actor in this video clip named AAA who is the guitarist of of oooo and xxxx

8 個已更新項目:

歐歐所以這樣才正確

The actor in this video clip named AAA is the guitarist of of oooo and xxxx

The actor in this video clip named AAA是一斷主格是一起的, 後面接 is the guitarist of of oooo and xxxx

就跟AAA is the guitarist of of oooo and xxxx 是一樣的

是這樣嗎?抱歉我文法真的很不好!!

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    "這個短片是AAA跟他朋友一起做的~並且AAA也是影片中的男演員~也是oooo跟xxxx的吉他手"

    "this short film was made by AAA and his friend, AAA is also the actor in the film who is the guitarist of oooo and xxxx"

    以上句子可以將形容詞子句,即第二部分以後的段落(AAA is also...)移到緊接在它所形容的名詞後面,並將子句裡的 AAA 和 who is 用疑問代名詞 who 和 連接詞 and 代替:

    this video clip was made by AAA, who is also the actor in the film and the guitarist of oooo and xxxx, and his friend(s).

    註:短片也叫做 video clip。

    "check out his bands at" : www.ooo 裡 at 的用法沒有錯,就像電子郵件地址的寫法類似:yournamehere@yahoo.com 就是 "yournamehere *at* yahoo.com,對網址用一樣的介係詞。

    "快看看他上傳的影片,他有很多好東西!" 之類的翻譯可以有:

    Visit this site for more of his awesome videos! (前提是你有對他本人做一些介紹)

    Check out his YouTube for some great vids he uploaded! (vids 是 video 口語上的縮寫)

    2008-08-01 06:48:47 補充:

    以上句型是在你想要一句表達的前提下寫出來的,有時候文法上無誤的句型讀起來有些奇怪是沒辦法的事,就跟 Everyone has his or her problems 一樣,到最後還是有人口頭上用 their 當成兩性皆用的單數代名詞(Everyone has their problems)。如果你願意分成兩段寫成

    this short film was made by AAA and his friend. he's the actor in the shore film also the guitarist of oooo and xxxx.

    2008-08-01 06:48:55 補充:

    那就文法上跟口頭上都比較好表達一些了,不過上面句子還是要修改。

    1. 養成習慣,所有專有名詞和每一句新句子的開頭,第一個字母要大寫。

    2. 前面內文如果提到兩個以上的名詞,除非可以以性別或單複數形式分出誰是誰,語法上不建議只用代名詞開下文。第二句的 he 可以說是針對 AAA 或他的 friend,除非前聞至少有提到他的 friend 是女的,才有可能讓讀者判斷誰是你說的 he,不然還是要用明確的(專有)名詞。

    2008-08-01 06:50:08 補充:

    3. 用 and 代替 also 連接兩項文法一致的事物,像 I have an apple and three bananas (名詞) 和 She is driving the car and eating a sandwich (現在分詞開頭) at the same time.

    所以改過後的句子如下:

    This short film (video clip) was made by AAA and his friend. AAA is the actor in the short film (video clip) and the guitarist of Oooo and Xxxx.

    2008-08-01 06:57:42 補充:

    註:Everyone has his or her problems 其實是針對兩性平等的問題而改成的,並非文法上問題所致。要說另一具文法上無誤可是口頭上多少有些笨拙的,就是像

    I, who am studying in Biochemistry, am a college student.

    文法上沒有錯誤,但跟 I am a college student who is studying in Biochemistry 起來,唸的感覺也有些不同。

    2008-08-01 12:37:41 補充:

    To 第一個補充內文:

    你現在主要是想介紹這部短片 (video clip) 還是 AAA?如果你主要是在介紹這部短片的話,在此建議你還是以 "This short movie (video clip)" 為簡介開頭,因為如果你是用 AAA 或 The guy named... 等等開頭,這樣就有著"這部短片是什麼並不重要,我用這部短片主要是介紹 AAA"的意味了。

    2008-08-01 12:41:29 補充:

    "你現在主要是想*先*介紹這部短片 (video clip) 再介紹 AAA ,還是只介紹 AAA 就好了?"

    因為通常在介紹某作品時,會先以此作品的資料作開頭,再延伸到其他相關人物及背景之類的資料。

    2008-08-01 12:48:43 補充:

    The actor in this video clip named AAA who's also the guitarist of of oooo and xxxx

    The guy in this video clip named AAA who's the guitarist of of oooo and xxxx

    第一句因為提到 actor,所以比較不會讓人以為 AAA 是他演的虛構人物的名字,而第二句因為用 guy,沒有詳細形容這個 guy 是何等人物,就可能會讓人摸不著頭緒了。

    2008-08-01 12:48:56 補充:

    還有,上面兩句都缺主要動詞,而後面那一句是以 who 開頭的形容詞子句,所以只要把 "who's" 的 who 移除,留下 is,就搞定了。後面的 also 可用可不用。

    2008-08-01 12:51:47 補充:

    註:Is 在上面是當作BE動詞而非助動詞,且BE動詞也算是動詞,只是他們的動變規則比較獨特(例:is, am, are, were, was, being)。

    2008-08-01 12:54:36 補充:

    很抱歉重複濫用補充內容,造成資料上的不整。

    總而言之,如果我們回到你上面第一次補充內容的第2.個問題,那就要由你決定你是想從這部短片開始介紹還是只介紹 AAA 就好了。

    2008-08-01 14:08:51 補充:

    你是要在影片簡介裡寫有關 AAA 的介紹吧?以上你最後寫的那句應該就可以當開頭了。請問你是什麼不懂?

    2008-08-01 15:49:13 補充:

    下面那一句不可以,因為那句加上了 who 就會把 who 後面的句字(包括本來是主要動詞的BE動詞 is)變成形容詞子句,而形容詞子句之所以不能單獨成句是因為沒有主要動詞,所以推出來整句也就沒有主要動詞,形成一個不完整句子了。

    上面那一句,如以上解釋的,用BE動詞 is 當作主要動詞,整句才能形成一完整句子。"The actor in this video clip named AAA" 整段只是一個主格而已, "named AAA" 是另一個在前面省略掉 who is 的子句。

    2008-08-01 16:06:25 補充:

    是的,沒有關係,你也可以說我中文打太慢(我留學6年+幾乎不在打中文)

  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

    到下面的網址看看吧

    ▶▶http://qoozoo09260.pixnet.net/blog

  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    也謝謝Terry的熱心幫忙!!!

  • Terry
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    This short film was made by AAA and his friend. AAA is the actor in the film, and the guitarist of oooo and xxxx.

    at 沒錯

    Check out the videos he uploaded. He's got lots of cool stuff.

    2008-08-01 09:20:06 補充:

    如果要全部帶到

    然後又著重在AAA的話

    你可以用AAA開頭

    AAA, the creator and the actor of this short film, is the guitarist of oooo and xxxx.

    AAA, the guitarist of oooo and xxxx, is the creator and the actor of this short film.

    2008-08-01 09:20:13 補充:

    前者重點放在他是吉他手

    後者重點放在他是演員兼作者

    這樣的話,句子夠短,所以用念的也不會太怪

    He's the actor in the short film, also the guitarist of oooo and xxxx.

    also 這樣用應該是可以的

    2008-08-01 09:29:49 補充:

    哈,忘記了他的朋友們了。

    AAA, the co-creator and the actor of this short film, is the guitarist of oooo and xxxx.

    AAA, the guitarist of oooo and xxxx, is the co-creator and the actor of this short film.

    co-creator 的 co- 是一起的意思,代表還有別的作者。

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