化妝品英文翻譯問題I

請協助確認英文翻譯是否恰當:

清爽潔膚乳

中文:效 用--溫和無刺激性的洗顏配方,能徹底潔淨肌膚,洗淨後成份不

殘留,肌膚柔嫩不緊繃。

使用方法--取適量於手心加些許水搓揉成細緻泡沫,再於臉上輕柔按

摩,最後以清水沖洗乾淨。

英文:Description: Enriched with negative ions and amino acids, effectively and

thoroughly cleanses the dirt and residues of make-up, restores

your skin and leaves it feeling purified.

Usage: Apply appropriate amount on the hand, and knead it with water. Gently

massage your face with it, and then cleansing with water.

非常感謝!

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  • Claire
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    清爽潔膚乳

    中文:效 用--溫和無刺激性的洗顏配方,能徹底潔淨肌膚,洗淨後成份不殘留,肌膚柔嫩不緊繃。

    使用方法--取適量於手心加些許水搓揉成細緻泡沫,再於臉上輕柔按摩,最後以清水沖洗乾淨。

    英文:Description: Enriched with negative ions and amino acids, effectivelyand thoroughly cleanses the dirt and residues of make-up, restores yourskin and leaves it feeling purified.

    Usage: Apply appropriate amount on the hand, and knead it with water. Gently massage your face with it, and then cleansing with water.

    版主翻的很好,關於 Description的部份,您似乎有加上”負離子”及”氨基酸”的專業用語.只有一些小地方,建議版主參考:

    Description: Enriched with negative ions and amino acids,

    effectively and thoroughly cleanses the dirt and removes residues of make-up,

    肌膚柔嫩不緊繃 leaves skin feeling fresh and comfortable, never tight or dry.

    Usage: Apply appropriate amount into palm with water.

    Gently massage over the face, rinse thoroughly.

    Hope it helps~

    參考資料: myself
  • 1 0 年前

    描述: 豐富與消極離子和氨基酸, 有效地和周到地洗滌構成土和殘滓, 恢復您的皮膚和留下它感覺被淨化。

    用法: 運用適當的數額在手, 和揉它用水。柔和地按摩您的面孔與它, 和然後洗滌用水。

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