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請幫我修改以下的文章

請幫我修改以下的文章,因為一定有很多文法的錯誤,謝謝=]

有附中文的意思~

我覺得草莓女孩是一本很有趣的書,因為故事的主角Boyer's Family 是住在佛羅里達,那裡一到冬天就會非常的冷,是不能種植穀物的,但是故事中的小女孩Bridie卻想要在那裡種草莓。當然,剛開始都會被大家嘲笑,尤其是他們的鄰居Slater's Family,他們是一群難相處的鄰居,不但自大又很霸道,也不斷的找Boyer's Family麻煩,但是Boyer's Family發現用暴力是無法解決問題的,因此他們就想到了兩全其美的方法來解決問題,不但感化了Slater's Family,兩家人從此就很和諧的生活著。

看完了這本書,我覺得就算人跟人之間一定會有一些小衝突,但也不能夠用暴力來解決,因為使用暴力並不能讓我們過著和諧的生活,因此,就算有衝突,也應該要好好的想辦法解決,可以用比較婉轉的方式去跟人家談,這樣所有的誤會一定會解開,大家也都可以快快樂樂的生活著。

"Strawberry Girl" is a interesting story, because in the story, ther e was a family, named "Boyer".They lived in Folo Rida. In the winter, there were very cold, and it is impossible to plant corn, but a little girl "Birdie", she wanted to plant the strawberries!Sure, they will derision of their neighbors "Slater", Slater is a bighead and bully family.They kept gave Boyer some trouble, fledgling their were fighted.But step by step, Boyer discovered fighting can't solve any problems.So they thought some ideas to solve problems, and that ideas influence Slater!Not long after, Boyer and Slater lived happily ever after. After I looked "Strawberry Girl", I thought It is impossible to get along with people without conflicts.If we had some conflicts, and we can't use fight to solve problems, because fight can't solve any problems.So If we had some conflicts, and we can use euphemism to talk with others.I believe If we useing euphemism to talk with others, and we can clear the air, then lived happily ever after.

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    "Strawberry Girl" is a interesting story---- an interesting story

    ther e was a family, named "Boyer".------there was.....(there 的r和e中間沒空格喔~~)

    They lived in Folo Rida----They live in Florida (如果是美國的一個州的話是這樣拼的)

    In the winter, there were very cold, and it is impossible to plant corn--It's very cold in the winter so it is impossible to plant corn.(不知道可不可以幫你重新改一下句子)

    she wanted to plant the strawberries!----she wanted to plant strawberries!(不用the)

    They kept gave some trouble---They kept giving the Boyer family some troubles.

    So they thought some ideas to solve problems---So they thought of some ideas to some the problems.

    that ideas influence Slater!---that the ideas influenced the Slater family

    Boyer and Slater lived happily ever after---The Boyers' and Slaters' lived happily ever after(Boyer 和Slater如果是家庭的話 就要像我上面幫你改得句子一樣喔~~ 前面要加the然後後面可以加s'或是family)

    After I looked "Strawberry Girl---After I read ....

    I thought It is impossible to ---I thought it was impossible to(句子中間的次要記得小寫喔~除了名字,地名還有I)

    If we had some conflicts, and we can't use fight to solve problems, because fight can't solve any problems---If we have conflicts, we can't use fighting to solve the problems, because fighting can't solve any problems

    So If we had some conflicts, and we can use euphemism to talk with others---So if we have any conflicts,we should use euphemism to talk to others.

    I believe If we useing euphemism to talk with others, and we can clear the air, then lived happily ever after----I believe if we use euphemism to talk with others, then we can get rid of all the misunderstanding, and live happily forever

    希望這些可以幫到你的忙喔~~

    參考資料: 住美國的
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