阿智 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請各位大大幫忙我改 英文履歷跟自傳

我沒有工作的經驗 履歷表看起來還蠻少有空洞

不知道有沒有什麼寫作技巧可以寫的比較好呢

至於英文自傳我覺得有點少

還需要寫什麼內容呢

請各位大大幫小弟改改

感激不盡

CURRICULUM VITAE

Joseph –Yu

No.162,Min-chu West Road,Taipei

Tel:(02) 2591-1866

Mobile phone:0989023193

Education :

-2005-2007 : Graduate from Chung-chou institute college of applicate foreign language company , Chang-hua county Yuan-lin town .

-2003-2005 : Graduate from Far-east college of applicate foreign language company , Tainan county Hsin-shih town .

Other Quality :

Chinese typing 20 words in a minute .

English typing 15 words in a minute.

English certificate in TOEIC

Activities:

Playing basketball on basketball court in chung-san area in Taipei

Watching movie, playing chess, Reading some novel.

References

Available on request

AUTOBIOGRAPHY

My name is Joseph -Yu. I am graduate from Chung-Chou Institute College and major in applicate foreign language. There are four people in my family. My father works in a repair factory in car. And my mother is a housewife. My young sister is a university student in hsin-chu .

  

In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlarge my knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientist or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play basketball.

Sometimes I like to engage some friends member basketball. I like to watch movies. Especially comedy film.

My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wish my English could be able to speak fluent English in the future.

I believe I am qualified to the post you have offered. Meanwhile, if you need any of my further information, please feel free to let me know.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Joseph-Yu

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    建議你寫上你的中文全名,旁邊( )寫上你的英文名字比較好

    Applicant: Joseph –Yu

    Address: No.162, Min-chu West Road, Taiwan

    Contact number: (02) 2591-1866

    Mobile phone: 0989-023193

    OBJECTIVE

    (請寫上你從哪得知該工作、該公司在徵人才、你想要應徵的職位是什麼)

    Ex. Seeking rotating training positions of a hotel as a supervisor or trainee to utilize and enhance my hotel management knowledge into practice.

    EDUCATION

    2005~2007 Chung-chou institute college of applicate foreign language,

    Chung-Chou, Taiwan.

    (註:不需要寫出詳細的學校地點,請寫上你在學期間主修科目為何,不懂你寫company是啥意思?你應該不是從公司內畢業的吧!是從學校畢業的吧!請把入學期間從幾年幾月寫上ex. 07/2005~06/2007)

    2003~2005 Far-East college of applicate foreign language, Tainan, Taiwan.

    (註:與上方註明一樣,請寫上你在學期間主修科目為何)

    EXPERIENCE

    (註:沒有正式長期的工作經驗,也可寫上打工的經驗,或者寫上自願性的社區服務也行,如果真的很沒有,就跳過)

    SPECIAL QUALIFICATIONS

    ※Fluent in Mandarin and Taiwanese

    (請寫上你會說的語言有哪些)

    ※Office Word skills in Chinese typing 20 words per minute, English

    typing 15 words per minute.

    ※Competent knowledge of Microsoft Word, Excel and Power Point

    (會的電腦軟體才寫)

    ※Award a certificate in TOEIC (請補上分數)

    Interests

    Playing basketball, go to movies, chess-playing, novel reading

    References

    Available upon request

    (標題部分請自行用粗框)

    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    由於發表字數有限,剩下的部份我貼在補充說明

    2008-08-10 22:39:17 補充:

    你寫的AUTOBIOGRAPHY看起來一半像自傳,一半又很像履歷,你好像搞錯方向了囉!先把你原本寫的東西修改好給你看。

    請看下方補充說明

    2008-08-10 22:45:23 補充:

    剩下的部分已經EMAIL到你的信箱囉!因為發表字數有限,搞得我好累!哈!

    祝好運!

    參考資料: 寫履歷自傳高手-我, 寫履歷自傳高手-我, 寫履歷自傳高手-我
  • pearl
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前
  • 1 0 年前

    你可以去下面那個部落格看看,他上面有發表很多求職中英自傳、中英自我介紹、履歷表和推薦甄試等的中英範例,還有一些面談面試的要領,你都可以參考喔!你若有問題也可以發問或是留言!

    部落格網址: http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007/

    PS那邊也有在幫人校對英文你可以問看看

    參考資料: 很實用的求職、翻譯、面試部落格
  • 1 0 年前

    CURRICULUM VITAE

    Joseph –Yu

    No.162(,)Min-chu West Road(,)Taipei

    Tel: (02) 2591-1866

    Mobile phone:0989023193

    Education :

    2005-2007 : Graduate(d) from Chung-chou institute college, Yuan-lin town ,Chang-hua county.

    Major in applicate foreign language.

    2003-2005 : Graduate(d) from Far-east college , Hsin-shih town ,Tainan county.

    Major in applicate foreign language.

    Other (Qualities) :

    Chinese typing 20 words in a minute .

    English typing 15 words in a minute.

    English certificate in TOEIC, (total score:XXX)

    (Hobbies):

    Playing basketball ,Watching movie, playing chess, Reading (some去除) novel(s).

    References (on request)

    AUTOBIOGRAPHY

    My name is Joseph -Yu. I (am去除) graduate(d) from Chung-Chou Institute College and major(ed) in applicate foreign language. There are four people in my family, (including my parents, younger sister and I), My father works (for) a (car maintenance company) , (And去除) my mother is a housewife, and.my young sister is a university student in hsin-chu .

      

    In my (leisure) time, I like to read novels. I think reading could (enhance) my knowledge. As for novels, I (like all kinds of them) such as ( scientic and kung-fu etc.) In addition to reading, I (am also interested in playing basketball).

    Sometimes I like to (gather some friends of basketball team to ) play basketball(我不肯定你的原意是否如此). I like to watch movies, especially comedy film.

    My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing (with) different (language). I wish ( I will be ) able to speak fluent English in the future, and I believe I am qualified to the post you have offered. Meanwhile, if you need any of my further information, please feel free to let me know.

    I look forward to (have) your (reply soon).

    (Joseph-Yu去除,因非屬信函,最末不必再署名)

    2008-08-11 14:57:40 補充:

    我已查閱過英文履歷書籍,格式大致正確,但一般都有 work experience 或 employment 工作經歷一項,因你似剛畢業,無該項資料應無妨,徵才公司看了會了解的。

    2008-08-11 15:00:15 補充:

    括符內是修正的地方,不是要註釋或省略的,看的時候可忽略括符,當做無括符來看,但有註明"去除"的除外。

    2008-08-11 16:27:58 補充:

    自傳最後再加 Thank you! 感覺較有禮貌。

    最後一行I及倒數第二段 似溶合了書信語句,應是無妨,畢竟是在找工作,希望得到回復,也沒錯。

    2008-08-11 16:38:40 補充:

    如要使自傳像一般的寫法,倒數第二段除保留英文興趣這段語句外,再加上平日如何努力研讀,希望未來可講得一口流利的英文(此已提及,再加入平時的認真情形),其他部分可改寫成 表示對該公司該項工作有興趣,且相信自已的能力及工作態度可勝任(能力可勝任文內已提及),如可得到該項工作,將儘心完成份內工作。最後一行則刪除。

    2008-08-11 17:23:41 補充:

    修正倒數第二段及以下文字

    My favorite course is English , if I have time , I always study it , because I think it is interesting to say one thing with different language, and I wish I will be able to speak fluent English in the future.

    續下

    2008-08-11 17:23:59 補充:

    續上

    I am very interested in the job that you offered, and I believe my ability and working attitude are qualified to it , if I can obtain that job, I will devote my effort and complete all works as good as I can.

    Thank you!

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  • 1 0 年前

    hello, U.

    currently im working in the HR section of a company in Toronto, Ontario Canada.

    here is my msn: frank_chiou@hotmail.com

    if you are interested, i can show you some real format of cover letter and resumes.

    good luck

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