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請英文高手幫忙檢查文法(急)證15點

We are living in the democracy and freedom country, and people are getting used to this life, so for the article “So what does it do for me” say, that “51 percent of high school students believing that government should vet stories going into the newspaper. I think it is ridiculous, because our high school students is only worry about what they are going to do on the weekend, and it makes me feel sad, they totally forgot how hard are our ancestor working to fight for human’s rights and freedom, it is important that people have a rights to know everything. Otherwise the country must be going to the devil very quickly, if the government tries to hide something. We know that our country was very freedom and ascensive, but that is in the earlier stage Lincon disagree the idea of slave and opposed to increase numbers of slave. Eventually this leaded to the Civilization War. Although Lincon disagree slave policy, the civil rights is hardly applied to Black people in the southern part of America. This also led to the start of African-American Civil Rights Movement a hundred years after. Upon the time of movement, White people and American government began to emphasize on the problems of human rights, democracy and equality. Eventually this lead to a better balance on democratic quality and human rights in the American society, therefore our country was become a strongest county in this world, if our next generation did not know this history, just think that the freedom or democracy is very easy to get, I think one day that our country must to go backward very soon.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    We are getting used to living in the democratic country, and so for the article “So what does it do for me” says that “51 percent of high school students believing that the government should evaluate some news and events before publishing the newspapers. However, I think it is ridiculous because we students only concern what we are going to do on the weekend. They totally forget how hard our ancestors were trying to fight for the human rights and the freedom which makes me very sad. It is important for people to have the rights to know everything. Otherwise, if the government tries to hide something from its people, the country will become addled very quickly. We know our country was a country of freedom, but that was in the earlier stage when Lincoln was against the idea of slaving and increasing the number of slaves. Eventually, it caused the Civilization War. Although Lincoln disagreed with the slave policy, it was still very hard for the Black people to get the civil rights in the southern America. After a hundred years, it gave rise to the start of African-American Civil Rights Movement. Because of movement, White people and American government began to notice the importance of human rights, democracy and equality. Finally, it brought about a better balance between democracy and human rights in the American society. Therefore, nowadays America is the strongest county in this world. If our next generation does not know this history, which the freedom and the democracy were very difficult to get, I think one day our country will definitely go backward very soon.

    我有對內容做一點點的修改喔

    但整體意思沒有變

    因為有些說法在中文可以這樣講,但在英文沒有這樣的說法

    希望可以幫助到你^^

    參考資料: 我是念外文的
  • 1 0 年前

    We are living in the democracy and freedom country, and people are getting used to this life. The article “So what does it do for me” says that “51 percent of high school students believing that the government should [vet](這甚麼?) stories going into the newspaper." I think it is ridiculous, because our high school students only worry about what they are going to do on the weekend, and it makes me feel sad. They totally forgot how hard are our ancestors worked to fight for human rights and freedom. It is important that people have the rights to know everything, otherwise the country will be [going to the devil](不懂?) very quickly if the government tries to hide something. We know that our country is very free and ascensive, but that is in the earlier stage when Lincoln(人名欸!!) disagreed the idea of slave and opposed to increase numbers of slave. Eventually, this lead to the Civilization War. Although Lincoln disagreed the slave policy, the civil rights hardly applied to the Black people in the southern part of America. This also led to the starting of African-American Civil Rights Movement a hundred years after. Upon the time of movement, White people and American government began to emphasize on the problems of human rights, democracy and equality. This eventually lead to a better balance on democratic quality and human rights in the American society. Therefore, our country became the strongest country in the world. If our next generation does not know this history, and just think that freedom or democracy is very easy to get, I think one day that our country will go backwards very soon.

    有很多句子有點不順耶...很努力修了

    參考資料: me的頭腦
  • 1 0 年前

    我們生活在民主和自由的國家,人們也習慣了這種生活,所以文章“是什麼,是否為我做些”說,這“ 51 %的高中生認為,政府應審核的故事,進入報紙。我認為這是荒謬的,因為我們的高中學生,只是擔心什麼,他們怎麼辦上週末,它使我感到難過,他們完全忘記了如何努力,是我們祖先的工作,爭取人類的權利和自由,這是非常重要的人民有權利知道一切。否則,該國必須去魔鬼非常迅速,如果政府試圖隱藏的東西。我們知道我們國家是非常自由和ascensive ,但這是在前期lincon不同意的想法奴隸和反對的人數增加的奴隸。最終,這有鉛向文明的戰爭。雖然lincon同意奴隸的政策,公民權利是難以適用於黑色的人在該國南部的一部分,美國。這也導致了開始的非洲-美國民權運動百年後。後的時間運動,白色人民和美國政府開始強調對人權問題,民主和平等的。最終,這會導致更好的平衡對民主的質量和人權在美國社會,因此,我們的國家成為一個最強的縣,在這個世界上,如果我們的下一代不知道這段歷史,只是認為,自由或民主,是很容易的得到,我覺得一天,我們的國家都必須到落後的很快。

    參考資料: 英文老師
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