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幫改英文作文(千拜託萬拜託)

最近在練習寫英文作文,可是寫一寫卻不知拿去給誰改,而且上了大學英文課的老師都很難找,所以不知能不能麻煩各位大大幫忙改一下呢?(以下附上,或著也可以直接寄到我的信箱:leolynn7683@yahoo.com.tw)

拜託嚕!感恩嚕!

Stay at my side forever

She always hope that she can find a Mr.Right, but when sheis expect, a man who is always at her side, but he didnt ask anything, he just hope taht she can find him, he always want to stay next her at first time, and to comfort her, but he think that he is unadmissibility.

Untill that day, when she cross the street, a car drive too fast and carsh her almost, a man running on, and push her to forward, Bomb! The tragedy was happend, the ma cant dodge the car, the woman seen this situation, run back to the scene, and bend down next the man, she cried and said thank you, the ma didnt say anything just smile a while, and then closed his eyes.

Suddenly her find that a letter with heart style in his hand, she took the letter, and open it, the letter is writen his endearment for her with every words.

Sad, chagrin and every emotion are bathe on her heart, the letter has been rub to a mass, tears cant stopped. Is too late ? Is everything are too late ? She cried and yelled in bludder.But its not useful.

Although the man is always been next her, but he just hope that he can be a grass at her side, and that its good enough, he didnt to brother her, when she has any problems, he will worried, and try to figure out some sloutions to slove those problems.

Just a little, and didnt make any mark, try to hide himself, try ro not broken there friendship....。

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女的總是希望自己能夠找到ㄧ個心中的真命天子,就在一直不停期待時,有一個男生,一直靜靜墨守在旁,希望她能夠發現他,他總是想在第一時間,就跳出來陪她,安慰她,可是他,卻一直認為自己沒有那個資格,直到某天,女的在要經過馬路時,一輛車疾駛而過,眼看那女的就要被撞了,只見一名男子突然衝了出來,推了那女的一把,(碰!)悲劇還是發生了,

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男的閃避不及,這一撞非同小可啊!女的看到了這個情況,跑回現場,俯在男子身旁感動的流著淚說:謝謝你,男的什麼也沒說,只是笑了笑,就閉上了眼睛,突然女的發現他手上有個折成愛心形的信,她打開看,裡面字字句句都是對自己的愛意,傷心,懊悔湧上心頭,手上的信早已揉成了一團,眼淚無止盡(撲簌!撲簌!)的滴著,泣不成聲的說:太晚了?難不成一切都太晚了..........

雖然男的就一直在女的身邊,只是男的願意一直指當一株雜草,盡量不去打擾女的,在女的有難,男的也擔心,男的也在想辦法,一點點不著痕跡,就是試圖想埋沒自己,就是怕去破壞了友誼.............

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中文版以補上!!(因為字數太多所以分兩次補上已完成!!)

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Stay with me forever

    She always hoped that she can find her Mr. Right. There was a man who was always beside her when she needed and has never asked for anything. He only hoped that he can be the first to comfort her whenever she needs. However, he thought was not qualified.

    One day, when she was crossing the street. A car drove too fast and almost hit her. This man ran in and push her forward. BOMB! The tragedy happened; the man couldn't dodge the car. She saw and ran back to him then bent. She cried and said "thank you". The man didn't say anything but smiled then closed his eyes.

    Suddenly she found a letter in a shape of a heart in his hand. She took the letter and opened it, the letter was written for her with endearment.

    Sorrow, chagrin and every emotion bathed her heart. The letter was rubbed to a mess and couldn't stop her tears. "Is it too late ? Is everything too late ? " She blubbered and yelled. But there was no use.

    Although the man has always been with her, but he only hoped to be a grass beside her and would be good enough. He didn't want to bother her. When she has problems, he will be worried and tried to figure ways to solve those problems.

    Just a little, and didnt make any mark(這邊這一整句都不對) , tried to hide himself and not to break their friendship.

    加油唷

    不懂在問

    我發現你有很多應該都是直接從中文翻

    還有

    你下次 寫完後

    應該要自己重看一遍

    如果你自己都看不懂 那我想你的老師也會看不懂唷

    2008-08-22 02:36:00 補充:

    改正

    1. However, he thought hewas not qualified.

    2. and pushed her forward

    3. Suddenly,

    4. the letter was written for her with his endearment.

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  • 1 0 年前

    Hi,

    can we maybe have the chinese version of your work?

    it would be easier that way..

    thanks,

    HP

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