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大堡礁位於澳大利亞東北部昆士蘭省對開,它縱貫蜿蜒於澳大利亞東海岸,全長2011公里,最寬處161公里。南端最遠離海岸241公里,北端離海岸僅16公里。在落潮時,部分的珊瑚礁露出水面形成珊瑚島。這裡景色迷人、險峻莫測,水流異常複雜,生存著400餘種不同類型的珊瑚礁,其中有世界上最大的珊瑚礁,魚類1500種,軟體動物達4000餘種,聚集的鳥類242種,有著得天獨厚的科學研究條件,這裡還是某些頻臨滅絕的動物物種的棲息地。北起約克角,南抵班達伯格,綿延2500多公里。礁上動植物品種繁多,為世界之最。

The great barrier reef is located northeast Australia the Queensland province to start out from opposite directions folio, it goes through vertically winds in the Australian East China Sea shore, the span 2011 kilometers, widest place 161 kilometers. The south tip of most is far away the seacoast 241 kilometers; north most part leaves the seacoast only 16 kilometers. When ebb tide, the partial coral reefs reveal the water surface to form the coral island. Here scenery enchanting, precipitous not measured that, the current of water exceptionally is complex, survives 400 kind of different type coral reefs, including in the world the biggest coral reef, the fish 1500 kinds, the mollusk reaches 4000 kinds, the accumulation birds 242 kinds, has the advantageous scientific research condition, here certain frequencies near extinguishes the animal species habitat. North gets up the York angle, south arrives at the class to reach Bergh, is continuous more than 2500 kilometers. In the reef the zoology and botany variety is many, is the world

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  • 1 0 年前
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    改寫多處,請自行對照,不妥處請自行再修正:

    大堡礁位於澳大利亞東北部昆士蘭省對開,它縱貫蜿蜒於澳大利亞東海岸,全長2011公里,最寬處161公里。南端最遠離海岸241公里,北端離海岸僅16公里。在落潮時,部分的珊瑚礁露出水面形成珊瑚島。

    The location of the great barrier reef is opposite to the Queensland province which is located at northeast of Australia , the reef goes vertically alongside the Australian East China Sea shore, the span is 2011 kilometers, widest place is161 kilometers. The longest distance between the reef ‘s southern tip and the seacoast is 241 kilometers, and the northern tip leaves the seacoast is only 16 kilometers., during the ebb, partial coral reefs will reveal from the water to form coral islands.

    這裡景色迷人、險峻莫測,水流異常複雜,生存著400餘種不同類型的珊瑚礁,其中有世界上最大的珊瑚礁,魚類1500種,軟體動物達4000餘種,聚集的鳥類242種,有著得天獨厚的科學研究條件,這裡還是某些頻臨滅絕的動物物種的棲息地。北起約克角,南抵班達伯格,綿延2500多公里。礁上動植物品種繁多,為世界之最。

    The scenery of here is enchanting, but the exceptionally complex currents are precipitous and hard to be prevented, and the reef surviving 400 kinds of different types of coral reefs, including the biggest coral reef of the world, 1500 kinds of fishes, the amount of mollusks reach 4000 kinds, the gathering birds have 242 kinds, So, there are abundance of scientific research resources here, and this place is a habitat for near extinct species also. North from of the York angle to southern Bergh, the reef is continuous more than 2500 kilometers. and there are the largeest species of creatures in the world over the reef.

    2008-08-25 15:40:49 補充:

    大堡礁位於澳大利亞東北部昆士蘭省對開

    上句之" 對開 " 意思如是" 斜對角" 的意思,The location of the great barrier reef is opposite to the Queensland province 應改為

    The location of the great barrier reef is ( diagonally) opposite to the Queensland province

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  • 1 0 年前

    ok!沒問題!

    翻譯得很好丫!!

    不會是作業吧??

    不是的話看得懂就ok了~~

    2008-08-26 10:44:50 補充:

    恩...如果你要很好的文法...請參考樓下那位...寫得真好~

    參考資料: 奇摩字典
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