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請文法高手幫我改文法喔 謝謝

麻煩文法高手 有錯的地方幫我大寫 或 HIGHLIGHT 起來 謝謝

I agree that physical exercise should be a require part of every school day because it is good for health. Physical exercise can be another way to release stress of students. Moreover, students can have better interaction with each other by exercise.

I prefer developing a center for business research in my country because people can increase job opportunities. Moreover, business research center might be a place where providing more chances of intern for undergraduates. This center also can be an attractive for tourists.

I agree that earning a lot of money is successful because the amount of money can regard as a successful in present society. The amount of money can be a prime standard of progress when people measure their abilities as well. Besides, successful people must earn plenty of money. It becomes a stereotype of people.

I prefer investing robots because they can do things that people are not willing to do. Moreover, buying robots might become a future trend. Earning money is my prime example.

I disagree that the time from birth to twelve years of age are the most important years of a person’s life because people’s thinking are always changing at time goes by. Each age has its importance no matter how old people are. People also are changing continuously older than twelve years of age.

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I prefer that students should wear school uniforms because they can save time. Students might have following the rules of school. Students can save plenty of money in buying clothes.

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I disagree that playing game is fun only when I win because I think that process of game is more important than win. If I can overcome the obstacles, I will feel fun, too. Moreover, absorbing the experiment is a prime reason.

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I agree that children should be helped with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so because children can help themselves without assisting of parents. They can do household tasks efficiently than their peers because they accumulate their experiences early.

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Besides, children can become more independent because they do not rely on others.

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看的出來您真的是英文高高手唷^^ 很謝謝您 這個點數一定是給您的

可是 我不太清楚我錯在哪 因為 您的很非常厲害的把每個句子改的更漂亮

不過還是謝謝您^______^ 英文高高手

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    I agree that physical activities should be required as a daily routine in school, because it is good for health. Physical activities can be another way to relieve stress from the students. Moreover, students can have better communication with each other while they play.

    I prefer to build a business research center in my country, because it helps to increase the opportunities for people who are looking for careers. Moreover, business research center might be a place where provids more chances the undergraduates. This center also be a resort for tourists.

    I agree that earning a lot of money is successful because the amount of money can be regarded as a success in present society. That amount of money can also be deemed as the primary criteria for some people to determine what their capabilities. Besides, successful people may earn plenty of money.

    I love to investigate the robots, because they can do things that some people are not willing to do. Moreover, buying robots might become a future trend. Earning money is my principal goal.

    I disagree that the time from the infancy years to the age of twelve is the most important time in someone's life, because the ideology of human kinds are always changing. Each year is important no matter how old people get. People are still changing continuously over their ages of twelve.

    I prefer that students wear school uniforms, because the students do not have to waste time on choosing the clothes to wear. Students might be following the rules of school. Students can save plenty of money from buying the clothes.

    I disagree that playing game is fun if and only if I win, because I think that process of playing the game is more important than winning. If I can overcome the obstacles, then I will still think it is fun. Moreover, absorbing the experiment is an important reason.

    2008-08-29 06:51:24 補充:

    I agree that children should be helping the chores as soon as they are able to do so, because children can help themselves without the assistance of the parents. They can do chores more efficiently than their peers, because they accumulate the experiences much earlier.

    2008-08-29 06:51:30 補充:

    Besides, children can become more independent because they do not rely on others.

    2008-08-29 06:51:43 補充:

    看的出來你有在用心寫呢

    不過 不知道這是一篇文章還是你在回答什麼題目 每一段的開頭都是 I ...

    這如果是一篇文章 開頭是 I ... 的話不太好喔

    我幾乎每一句都改了 錯的地方請自行檢查吧

    另外 因為改的有點興起 把你有一些文法沒錯的地方也改了一下

    造成困擾的話對不起喔

    參考資料: 自己
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