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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請文法高手幫我改文法喔 謝謝

I will give an animal to assist a child develop because children can be a person with a lot of patient. Then, they might become more independent. Children can be training to have a sense of responsibility.

I believe that students should be given several short vacations every year because one long vacation might make them lazy. Students can take a rest shortly and temporarily. Students can use the short holidays to discuss their homework with their peers.

I prefer to live in a modern apartment building because of the convenient transportation. Moreover, the public security is better than living in a traditional house. Furthermore, a modern apartment building might have an attached kindergarten.

I think that advertising tell us about new products that may improve our lives because new products which improve our lives can stimulate consumption. People chase down a convenient life as time goes by. Moreover, people have a sense of curiosity to buying new products.

I prefer to spend free time indoor because of averting traffic jam. The weather is too hot and I do not need to spend much money.

I hope that my school can advocate and hold non-smoking activities because smoking is harmful students’ hearts and lungs. A lot of students might smoke on the campus. School stands at the forefront of limiting students to smoke.

有錯的地方麻煩幫我"大寫" 改過來唷 ( 請告訴我為什麼錯?? )

謝謝大家^_^

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RO 很謝謝你 但是我要的不是改寫句子 而是改文法...

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    ==> I would like to give a pet to a child to help develop the child's personality. I expect the child to become more patient, more independent and more responsible by raising the pet alone.

    ==> I believe that students should be given several short vacations every year. It has to be short because a longer one might make them lazy. They can take a break or have homework discussions with their classmates during those brief vacations.

    ==> I prefer to live in a modern apartment building than a traditional house. The transportation is usually more convenient around a modern apartment building area; the public security within is normally safer; And there might be a kindergarten nearby if there isn't one right on the first floor of the modern apartment building I live in.

    ==> I think advertiments on new products to improve our lives can stimulate consumption. The pursuit of more comfortable and more convenient lives has never ceased over time. Plus people can be curious to be willing to give new products a try.

    ==> I prefer to stay indoors than outdoors when I have some free time to spend. That way, I get away from the traffic and hot weather. And I wouldn't have to spend too much money.

    ==> I hope that my school can say no to smoking and hold activities to advocate its banning policy. Smoking can do a lot of damage to people's body. It's not good for our hearts and not good for our lungs either. As a lot of smokers get addicted to smoking when they were still students, schools play an important role in getting smoking out of our lives as they stand right there in the forefront.

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