blanc 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請教英文達人幫我看兩句英文句子?

This company stretched its business antenn to home entertainment market such as

TV, video and DVD HiFI format, and computing.~在home entertainment market

such as 那邊外國老師說我有錯..但我看不錯那裡錯?

It can foress and creat the future of what a consumer needs beforehand than other

competitors.

beforehand的前面.老師給我打個點..不知要在加什麼字..或那裡錯說?

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    This company stretched its business antenna to home entertainment market such as Digital LCD TV, video and DVD HiFi format Recorders & Players, and computers. ~在home entertainment market such as 那邊外國老師說我有錯..但我看不錯那裡錯?

    答: market改為products, 因為居market不等於後面列舉的諸產品. 另外各產品名稱歸產品名稱, 不可混入科技名稱而併列.

    It can foresee and create the future of what a consumer needs beforehand than other competitors.

    答: beforehand改為earlier, 因為than的前面要用比較級. competitors前不須用other, 改為the就好, other只用在有一組以上的competitors時. 您的拼字要細心些, 我已幫您訂正.

    參考資料: 自己; 英文文法
  • 老古
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    Good comments!

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