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請幫我改一下錯誤的文法或最佳化。

Dear Tracy,

We already pay the prepaymant

Please find the attaced meit remittance of Bank receipt

In addtion,please distribute the prepaymant according to the form below.

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Dear Tracy,

We are already pay the prepaymant

Please find the attaced remittance of Bank receipt

In addtion,please distribute the prepaymant according to the form below.

這句才對= =

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那請問熊熊,是哪兒拼錯了??

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其實我自己也搞不懂很多地方,雖然我知道怎麼寫但是還是有如下問題:

attached 為何要加ed,我不知道…直覺就是要加,不加很奇怪,但是我不知道為什麼要加。

還有另一個 prepayment為什麼要加 ment 我也不知道…

唉=_=半調子

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兩位大大都是高手,能不能幫忙解決,我另一個發問,是原文書的小案例的,我的英文還不夠格去「自學」=_=

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cavalier大大

請問為什麼不能用pay呢?我不是付預付款嗎?

用make和用pay差在哪呢?

至於:In addtion,please distribute the prepaymant according to the form below.

我是想表達:另外,請將我給予的預付款依我下列表格做分配。

(錢會分給不同的工廠去使用)

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另外:distribute和split 差在哪呢?

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    第1句: 既是prepayment, 動詞就不可用pay, 而要用make

    第2句: 銀行的水單稱為bank's confirmation of transfer

    第3句: 您的意思是根據列表來"分攤"預付款嗎? 不是distribute, 而是用split即可. 此外form只是表格, 填妥的衣語意是list.

    Dear Tracy,

    We have already made the prepaymant.

    Please find the attached file being a copy of Bank's Confirmation of Transfer.

    In addition, please split the prepaymant amount according to following list.

    2008-10-01 15:18:45 補充:

    回版大:

    1) 通常用pay的時候後面是接金額或受款人, 而payment或prepayment所搭配的動作是make或effect.

    2) 請將我給予的預付款依我下列表格做分配。

    要表達這裡的款項"分配", 可用split或allocate. 款項不宜用distribute, 只有物品化整為零才用distribute, 例如分銷、行銷.

    參考資料: 自己的翻譯經驗
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    1 0 年前

    Dear Tracy,

    We have already paid the prepayment.

    Please find the attached mite remittance of the Bank Receipt.

    In addtion,please distribute the prepayment according to the form below.

    meit (should be "mite" if you mean a small amount)

    參考資料: study and reaserch
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  • 1 0 年前

    Dear Tracy,

    We've already pay the prepayment

    Please find the attached remittance of Bank receipt

    In addition, please distribute the prepayment according to the form below

    若普通人看,那樣子人家就看得懂了,只有一兩個字拼錯而已

    參考資料: 加拿大留學生
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