Renny L 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文訂正20點!!!!!!!! grammar errors

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This is all the things that real happen in our real life. This film is very clearly shows many examples based on the fact. Here is the example; Tracy does not think late for school is a big thing because in her new group, no one is on time. She can use plenty of excuse for being late and many people are doing the same thing. There is another example, Evie takes Tracy to the park and there is lots of people are using drugs. Tracy is hard to refuse to use drug in this situation while everyone else is using it. Teens are the age that has less stability. Peers are the most often company with teens besides the family. This is really important for teens have enough wisdom to judge on things should follow or not.

For example, when Tracy shows her Tongue rings with wild behavior to her mom, her mom is going crazy when she sees her daughter is lost her mind. Tracy is becoming a follower of Evie.

- For example, when Tracy shows her Tongue rings with wild behavior to her mom, her mom is going crazy when she sees her daughter is lost her mind. Tracy is becoming a follower of Evie

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  • 1 0 年前
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    (Those are) all the things that real happen in our real life. this film (is 去除,因show是動詞,前不可加 be 動詞) very clearly shows many (cases, 使用example, 因是正式影片內容,非舉例) based on the fact,here is (an) example; Tracy does not think ( being) late for school is a big thing (,) because in her new group, no one is on time, she can (makes) plenty of excuse(s) for being late and many people are doing the same thing, (there is 去除) another example, Evie takes Tracy to the park (where has) lots of people are using drugs. Tracy is hard to refuse to use drug in this situation , (when) everyone else is using it, teens are (those persons , teens指青少年們, 應和下行的teens意思一致 ) (who with) less stability, (and) peers are (the companies who most often stay) with teens besides (their) family, (it, 使用this 語意不正確) is really important for (those young people, 避免使用過多的teens) have enough wisdom to judge (on 去除,因judge是及物動詞) things (which) should (be followed) or not, (for instance,避免使用太多 example), when Tracy shows her Tongue rings with wild behavior to her mom, (and) (the) mom is going (mad) when she sees her daughter (is 去除) lost her mind (to become) a follower of Evie.

    2008-10-02 07:55:28 補充:

    去除說明文字

    Those are all the things that real happen in our real life, this film very clearly shows many cases based on the fact, here is an example; Tracy does not think being late for school is a big thing , because in her new group, no one is on time,

    2008-10-02 07:55:52 補充:

    she can makes plenty of excuses for being late and many people are doing the same thing, another example, Evie takes Tracy to the park where has lots of people are using drugs. Tracy is hard to refuse to use drug in this situation , when everyone else is using it,

    2008-10-02 07:56:21 補充:

    teens are those persons who with less stability, and peers are the companies who most often stay with teens besides their family, it is really important for those young people have enough wisdom to judge things which should be followed or not,

    2008-10-02 07:56:29 補充:

    for instance, when Tracy shows her Tongue rings with wild behavior to her mom, and the mom is going mad when she sees her daughter lost her mind to become a follower of Evie.

  • 1 0 年前

    請問你是只要改文法嗎?有時候文法會牽涉到修詞 可是你沒特別說 所以我就盡量只改文法

    These are all the things that happen in our real lives. This film shows many clear examples based on the fact. Here is one example: Tracy does not think being late for school is a big deal because no one is on time in her new group. She has plenty of excuses for her latenesses, and many people do the same thing. Here is another example: Evie takes Tracy to the park where a lot of people use drugs. Tracy finds it hard to refuse those drugs in that situation, since everyone else uses it. Teenagers are at the age with less stability. Peers are their most common company beside the family. It is really important for teens to have wise judgement on whether or not certain things should be followed.

    For example, when Tracy shows her tongue ring and other wild behaviors to her mom, her mom goes crazy when she sees her daughter loses her mind. Tracy has become a follower of Evie.

    - For example, when Tracy shows her tongue ring and other wild behaviors to her mom, her mom goes crazy when she sees her daughter loses her mind. Tracy has become a follower of Evie

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