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內容: This is all the things that real happen in our real life. This film is very clearly shows many examples based on the fact. Here is the example; Tracy does not think late for school is a big thing because in her new group, no one is on time. She can use plenty of excuse for being late and many people are doing... 顯示更多 內容:
This is all the things that real happen in our real life. This film is very clearly shows many examples based on the fact. Here is the example; Tracy does not think late for school is a big thing because in her new group, no one is on time. She can use plenty of excuse for being late and many people are doing the same thing. There is another example, Evie takes Tracy to the park and there is lots of people are using drugs. Tracy is hard to refuse to use drug in this situation while everyone else is using it. Teens are the age that has less stability. Peers are the most often company with teens besides the family. This is really important for teens have enough wisdom to judge on things should follow or not.
For example, when Tracy shows her Tongue rings with wild behavior to her mom, her mom is going crazy when she sees her daughter is lost her mind. Tracy is becoming a follower of Evie.

- For example, when Tracy shows her Tongue rings with wild behavior to her mom, her mom is going crazy when she sees her daughter is lost her mind. Tracy is becoming a follower of Evie
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