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The most powerful reason that makes Tracy turns to a trouble maker is that she seems happily for any change on herself. Tracy never says no to the illegal things. She thinks the illegal thing makes her life better than before. One day, Tracy is late for her science class and she find out that today is the due day of her science project. Then, the counselor asks to see Tracy because she wants to tell Tracy that the best way for Tracy is to go back to seventh grade because every classes Tracy takes is pending fail. This news is wake Tracy up and pulls her back to the regular path. She realizes she is wrong. Even though the one she used to be is only a common girl but at least she has lovely life. Now, she lost it all. Hopefully, the lovely family won’t leave Tracy behind.

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    The most powerful reason that makes Tracy turns to a trouble maker is that she seems happily for any change on herself. Tracy never says no to the illegal things. She thinks the illegal thing makes her life better than before. One day, Tracy is late for her science class and she find out that today is the due day of her science project. Then, the counselor asks to see Tracy because she wants to tell Tracy that the best way for Tracy is to go back to seventh grade because every classes Tracy takes is pending fail. This news is wake Tracy up and pulls her back to the regular path. She realizes she is wrong. Even though the one she used to be is only a common girl but at least she has lovely life. Now, she lost it all. Hopefully, the lovely family won’t leave Tracy behind.

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    已經將有錯誤地方紅圈出來

    稍做更正即可

    像是make 後面要接原形動詞

    或是在敘述事情的時候,one day ,要用過去式 [動詞]

    以上回答提供參考

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