白毛 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請會英文的大大幫忙檢查一下文章(很急)

因為字數太多,請到http://blog.yam.com/lunatic0114

進去第一篇是文章,感謝

(等解答出來我就會把文章刪掉)

已更新項目:

重新貼上....- -((顯示怪怪的?)

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  • 小羊
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    您好很高興為您稍作修改

    The food crisis is an important problem which should be solved.

    (problem needs to be solved 文法對 不過邏輯怪怪的,難道有problem which doesn't need to be solved ?)

    People have been destroying the environment and being desperate to find resources. Nature has been disarranged by humans; as the result(consequences), climate changed, and crop yield was getting smaller. Recent day (Nowadays), the price of petroleum has increased greatly fast, the fuel cost too much money; farmers must have to raise the price of crops to balance the cost . All the things are binding close(altogether). Before long, the problem of food shortage will become large(bigger) and large. The panic about food does not only present in LEDC (Lower Economically Developed Country). MEDC are trying to produce (invent)biofuel which needs some fundamental materials such as maize, sorghums, soybeans, straws, sugarcanes, and sunflowers. These foods This solution may not completely work on those countries who only own limit land to plant extra materials to produce what biofuel required . Smaller crop yield but a part of staples are going to feed the machines. The limited resources on Earth, the reasons for all Wars. Never stop.

    灰色是不必要的

    紅色是我改的

    綠色是選字上的錯誤或者建議

    黃色底 是不知道你的意思

    稍微改了一下 你參考看看

    有問題補充或者另外來信發問

    初步的更改..沒有很好..不過還是希望多少能對你有所幫助

    參考資料: 美國的台裔
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  • 1 0 年前

    阿阿阿阿,,,,已經來不及修改了,仍很感謝兩位大大.....(( - -)

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  • 1 0 年前

    ok~

    That's prefect~

    + oil~

    I hope you can write more interesting~

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