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There are several advertisement channels such as TV, the internet, Magazine, and radio. Definitely, each advertisement channel has providing different power expanding at consumer market. Obviously, TV adverting is high impact to consumers, however, it often cost a lot of money. Magazine advertising which cost a lot of money too, however, it is appearing for longer period at high impact. The internet is low cost, however, sometimes it is really effective to attract audiences. Thus, choosing right adverting channel and understand which one is more effective that will save money and time.

Firstly, we will advertise our Penfolds Thomas Hyland Shiraz 2003 on the TV as 30 seconds advertisement. The content of the TV advertisement will be providing abundant information of Penfolds Thomas Hyland Shiraz 2003 and delivering right message to audiences such as providing how good is our Thomas Hyland Shiraz 2003 to audience and the benefits of red wine. In the end, emphasize our image of Penfolds.

Secondly, we will advertise our wine in a wine magazine and it will be showed a picture of our product with fully details and a discount coupon, people can use this coupon at any bottle shop to get 20% off. Thirdly, we will participate any wine exhibition in Japan to gain good reputations.

In addition, as soon as we have obtained good reputation, we will create a Penfolds website which will be proving information of Penfolds and services for Japanese. Therefore, when anyone would like to buy a particular wine, they do not have to go to bottle shops, they can get it directly. In case, they have any question, they can go to the website to contact Penfolds.

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    There are several advertisement(advertising) channels such as TV, the internet, Magazine, and radio. Definitely, each advertisement (advertising)channel provides different influential power in the consumer market. Obviously, TV advertising or(advertisement) has a significant impact on consumers, however, it often costs a lot of money. Magazine advertising costs a lot too, however, it has lasting influence. The cost of internet is lower, however, sometimes it is really effective to attract audiences. Thus, choosing the right advertising channel and understanding which one is more effective will save money and time. Firstly, we will advertise our Penfolds Thomas Hyland Shiraz 2003 on TV for 30 seconds. The content of the TV advertisement will provide abundant information of Penfolds Thomas Hyland Shiraz 2003 to deliver right message to audiences such as how good our Thomas Hyland Shiraz 2003 is and the benefits of red wine. In the end, we emphasize our image of Penfolds. Secondly, we will advertise our wine in a wine magazine by showing a picture of our product with fully details and a discount coupon, people can use this coupon at any bottle shop to get 20% off. Thirdly, we will participate any wine exhibition in Japan to gain good reputation. In addition, as soon as we have obtained good reputation, we will create a Penfolds website which provides information and services of Penfolds for Japanese. Therefore, when people are willing to buy a particular wine, they do not have to go to bottle shops but get it directly instead. In case, they have any question, they can go to the website to contact Penfolds.

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