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有請大大幫忙唷 不知道以下的文法是否有誤呢?

They played together and constructed a village on lake side. He has not lonely and roam any more. He is happy and live with his new friends .

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  • 1 0 年前
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    這段敘述共有三句:

    1. They played together and constructed a village on lake side.

    played together與constructed a village兩件事並非直接的因果且規模差距頗大, 建議加個even(甚至於), 表示程度的大幅提高.

    → They played together and even constructed a village on lake side.

    2. He has not lonely and roam any more. (X)

    lonely是形容詞, 前面是be動詞才對. 後半句roam的否定式要用助動詞do. 整句的時態不對, 應配合第1句用過去式.

    → He was not lonely and did not roam any more. (O)

    3. He is happy and live with his new friends. (X)

    時態也應配合改為過去式. is happy與live with his new friends兩語意並非對等, 建議改為不定詞to live當副詞片語修飾happy.

    → He was happy to live with his new friends. (O)

    2008-10-08 22:14:48 補充:

    有一種敘述法是完全以現在時態來說故事, 那麼三句都要用現在式:

    They play together and even construct a village on lake side. He is not lonely and does not roam any more. He is happy to live with his new friends .

    2008-10-08 22:21:50 補充:

    on (the) lake side = at the lake side

    注意前者加the語意著重side, 不加the是把lake side視為一字.

    後者則必須加the, 因為at必是針對side.

    參考資料: 自己; 英文文法
  • 1 0 年前

    They played and constructed a village together at the lake side. He is not lonely and (? roam 是跑) anymore. He lives happily with his new friends.

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