? 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

麻煩英文高手幫我將以下英文文章整理

I would like to introduce my new friend.Her name is peggy.She is 21 years old and single.She comes from chia yi(嘉義)and rents a house in kaohsing.Peggy lives alone now.Currently,She studies in XX University,and her major is foreign languages.

Peggy works on hotel public relations.She has a part time job in hair saloon shop on holiday.she likes to listen R&B and jazz.she likes to eat delicious food,especially japanese cusine.She enjoys watching movies on weekends.The horror movies and romamtic films are her favorite.

Her interests are sufing on the internet,playing computer games,sining and shopping.

She is also an optimistic person,who can live her life with a smile all day.her advantage are countless.she is the new friend of mine whom,I jost know this semester.

This is the introduction about her.thank you everyones.

以上是我自己寫介紹朋友的演講稿,但請高手在幫我整理一下,因為SHE...連接太多,請高手是否可以用比較順的句子幫我連接起來.

而且也要將這些問題加進去

1.Does peggy like her job?why or why not?

2.why does she like R&B& Jazz.

3.what is her favorite taiwanese dish and why?

4.what is her favorite movie?what's the plat?

5.where does she go for sining and shopping.

拜託各位英文高手建議我如何整理這篇文章,並指導我將以上問題如何加進去(有例句更好) 拜託拜託~~

已更新項目:

給回答者:阿邦~這是我要上台演講的,我說的加進去的問題是要加進文章中,要如何加較好?

2 個解答

評分
  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Hi everyone,I'm going to introduce my new friend,Peggy.She comes from chia yi and living alone in kaohsing now.Peggy studies foreign language in XX University.On holidays,she has a part time job in hair saloon shop.

    Her interest is listening to R&B and jazz music,eating delicious food especially japanese cusine,sufing on the internet,playing computer games,sining and shopping.

    She enjoys watching movies on weekends.Horror or romamtic films are her favorite.

    She is an optimistic person who can live her life with a smile all day.(請你在多敘述2.3個優點,不然後面那句有點好笑)her advantage are countless.

    This is the introduction about her.thank you everyones.

    刪掉年齡跟單身...個人認為不重要@@(還是你是要在聯誼的時候說的?)

    *你要求加入的問題我不懂

    是要自己演說到一半忽然提出來問聽眾?講完以後要有獎徵答?

    2008-10-12 18:28:02 補充:

    ..............she has a part time job in hair saloon shop and she loves/dislike her job because.....

    是這樣加嘛?

    如果不是那我也不知道了=..=

  • 5 年前

    自從失戀後,看到路上成雙成對,就格外放閃,嘴巴瀟灑說只是少一個人來愛,但不可否認還是希望可以多多認識新的朋友,

    往認真爬文3個月以上,終於找到隱藏在網路中,傳說中的李姐,

    在今年3月初就預約來找,果然是口碑相傳,不做廣告的,我排第3次就遇到雙方非常有感覺的,目前是暫停排約,

    李姐那邊可以暫停排約1次,會員時間可以展延拉長時間,也在這段時間可以觀察對方.

    推薦給有需要的朋友參考

還有問題?馬上發問,尋求解答。