1. My Life
2. My Birthday
3. The City Where I live
4. A World Without Trees
5. The Worst Pet in the World I Think
6. If I have a hundred million dollars
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I am an early person. I live in the Amazon jungo. My clothes are made of animal
skin and leaves. I like my clothes very much because they keep me warm in winter
and let me feel cool in summer.
I buy food in the market inside the forest. I use the money to buy it, if I dont have
money, I will incarnation into a pirate to plunder someones money. Also, I can go
hunting for the animals with my spear, the venison taste delicous. I can climb the tree
to pick some wild fruit to eat.
The house I live is a cave. There is no any lights inside, it is so scary. But, I can
make a fire so that it wont be dark at night and it will be warm. I use my hand with
knife to build a big boat so that I can cross the river by myself, if I dont have a boat
, maybe I will never see the sun.
Actually, I dont enjoy my life because I think it is too tired. But sometimes, I feel
interesting of my life because I can run in a grassland, incarnation into a pirate and
kill many animals. It is so satisfy.
- 1 0 年前最佳解答
early person ==> early bird. 早起者
Amazon jungo ==> Amazon jungle.
I buy food in the market inside the forest. forest 是森林 Amazon jungle是叢林 (當笑點ㄅ)
叢林有market? 還有收錢? (可以當笑點ㄅ)
incarnation into a pirate==>改為 impersonate/dress like/become a private
plunder ==> 改為 rob 搶劫
可以加說 I don't know what money they use in the jungle market? US dollar or NT dollar? 當笑點
hunting for the animals with my spear --> for要去掉
venison 是鹿肉,改為 wild meatㄅ
no any lights--> any 要去掉
so that --> that 要去掉
I use my hand with knife to build a big boat --> hand with要去掉
沒有boat就看不到sun? 在叢林很難看到sunㄅ,可以用來當笑點ㄅ, say" Oh, right! I can not see the sun even with my boat... Because I live in the jungle!"
It is so satisfy. ==>改為 I am satisfied.
The jungle has many sneaks, they always come in my cave without invitation (沒有邀請函). I don't know if they come in to wake me up or just to bit me? 蛇是來叫我起床還是要來咬我?參考資料： 留美4年