a_weiya 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

想請英文高手幫我改一下,謝謝! ((急))

New roles and expectations have brought out the tensions between men and women that are actually helping relationships to a new status. Well-build relationships, correspond to each other’s lives, and have abilities to support and given family or even one’s own are the essential characteristics in which we called the changes of sex roles expectations. We all should accept the facts that these changes will exist for very long time and hopefully that these changes will lead both sexes to the road of success and to fulfill the dreams of feminism will someday be completely equalize.

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    New roles and expectations have brought (about) the tension(s去除) between men and women (, which 此關係代名詞代表前面整句宜用非限定用法) are actually helping relationships to a new status, (like) well-build relationships, (prop up each other), and have abilities to support (the, support 已表達,無須再寫give) family (etc.) (or even one’s own? , 可去除,似多餘) are the essential characteristics (in 去除) which we called the changes of sex roles expectations, we all should accept the facts that these changes will exist for (a) very long time and hopefully that these changes will lead both sexes to the (way) of success and to fulfill the dream(s去除) of sexes equality of feminism someday. (fulfill..和後面的will someday be completely equalize 語意重複)

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